Hans stared out the bar window, sipping on a a liqour they called a Berlin Death Wish. "Not the greatest time for a drink" Hams thought to himself.
He could se Sabres circling the whole base, like bees to a hive that been filled with glue.
"I wonder.........." Hans walked over to a communicator set in the bar, luckily the ships didnt jam the communications on Vogtland. Hans started filing through his nueral net log, looking for contacts.
"Ther you are you little rascal" Hans said to no-one in particular. "Wakey wakey, Vinny".
"Hmmgrph gimme ten more minutes alri?" said Vinny in an Italian accent.
"Vinny, wake up you lazy slob!"
"Alright alright, Hans, what is your problem?" Vinny rebutled.
"Youd have a problem too when your surrounded by 50 Sabres!"
"Whazza?!" Vinny unintelligibly replied.
"Vinny I need a 'speacial order' today" Hans told the illegal arms dealer.
"What do you need my Hessian friend?" Vinny sarcasticly replied.
"I need.....3 fusion bombs".
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A few hours later three ships, Hammerheads approached the base. "Heh, thanks Vinny" Hans said to himself.
As quickly as the ships appeared they dropped their payload on the Sabres. Although most were destroyed, 3 remained. In the hngar bay the port master spoke over the intercom, "Gamma, Kappa, Delta and Zeta Wings cleared for luanch".
The wings were dispatched, and engaged the remaining ships. With 12 casualties the Hessians won the battle.
"Now, for Leipzig" Hans said over the Stilletos Comm set.
It looks and reads much better now, I think, and all I did was resolve the spacing issues. No other corrections were made. You should also consider revising your material from time to time; check for spelling mistakes, continuity errors, and other problems like that.
Edited by - Codename on 6/23/2005 5:57:42 AM