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Captured

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Post Thu Mar 11, 2004 7:53 am

Hidden on Maine? That explains the "weapons testing". They were testing the new guns for the sleepers. :p

"Xenos, the breakfast of champions" -YowuLing

Post Thu Mar 11, 2004 8:02 am

Wonder how they managed a jump hole in a cave. Interesting idea though ...




Jose Chavez: "Trent! It's good to see my kind of scum."

Post Thu Mar 11, 2004 2:12 pm

well, the Nomads were watching all of space so they couldnt fly to the jumphole in space so it had to be the very unstable one in the cave on Vespus


Orillion: So Trent, will you help us with the mission?

Trent: Sure, as long as I'm not shot at, knocked out, elecroucted, held at gun-point, scewered alive by giant alien shapeshifters, have to dive out windows or fight off spindly Nomad incubi

Post Fri Mar 12, 2004 5:09 am

hey the story is well good but it would be good if you could include the coalition from freelancer 1 soewhere in it and could you post the new episode pronto

Post Sun Mar 21, 2004 8:46 am

are yu eva gonna continue the damn story?

Post Mon Mar 22, 2004 3:29 am

Hmm. What if the Nomads had actually destroyed Sol, and the Coalition themselves sent sleeper ships from Venus to the Sentari Cluster ? I can just think of the names:

1) The Kresnaraya for Russia and Eastern Europe
2) The Shantung for China and the Far East
3) The Mmbuktu for Angola and other disgruntled African nations
4) The Haider for the Subcontinent (India) and Arabia
5) The Garcia for the Caribbean and South America

Oh. Just one small point of interest. In the intro, it shows the Liberty landing on Manhattan and being set up as some sort of central point. You can still see it standing there now though, it's the big building with the Liberty emblem. Perhaps it's some sort of fake ? You never know.

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 10:41 am

Im sorry its ben so long. computer probsm

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 11:04 am

Captured Pt. 6: The Sacrifice


The Nomad force uncloaked right in front of us. We didnt think we could make it out alive, just as the real Liberty and Kasuri launched form Maine. The Nomads turned their fire to us. Our ships were distroyed and we all made it to our escape pods and the launching Rienland used its tractor beam and took us aboard. The nomads distroyed the Britonia just as it cleared the planet's gravity. It exploaded right in front of us. Just then the Rienland activated its stardrive engens and we blasted away from the Nomads. The crew that was still awake aboard the Rienland put us in the criogenic pods and we saw nouthing but black and we were asleep instantly. When we awoke we were right above a gas giant planet and as the servay ships went to see if any of the moons were inhabbitable. Trent noticed an unusuial blue light moving right toward us. Then the light took on the form of two Nomad Battleships. They were scouters and they followed us from Sirius. A Patariot launched from the Libery just as we launched from the Rienland. "For every spirit theres a proper place in hell!" Herr Von Claussen we thaught. Then over the radio we herd a Kasuri accent. "Launch the quantum- antimatter hybred bombs" we heard the man on the radio say. " Oh my God, Lt. Ozu!" Trent scremed. "yes its me trent. That was my servent and double that died on Tekagi's arch." Just then we herd and alarm over the radio coming from Ozu's ship. " I have a bomb jam, Juni, Trent, remember me, as I will always remember you." Ozu's radio went dead, and him and Von Claussen started flying toward the Nomad Battleships. " If we distroy those battle ships the Nomads won't be able to find us." we heard Von Claussen say. Then as Ozu and Von Claussen were near the Nomad Battleships, there was a powerful explosion. And the Nomad Battleships were vaporized. There was a blue cloud and there was nothing elce. Von Claussen and Ozu had given their lives to let humanity have another chance. Then Juni made a startling discovery, The artifact was gone!


End of Part 6



Edited by - killa on 6/16/2004 12:51:04 PM

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 11:07 am

I am having computer probs, I am on a a friends computer now so i dont know when i can post a new episode. i will as soon as possable.

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 11:28 am

Neat.
Why is it like, i apear in nearly EVERY FL fanfiction

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 11:29 am

Guy you gotta hand it to yourself , your a born writer but is this in freelancer 2 or is it just to be made up lol

oh by the way MAKE IT SO KING DOSENT DIE hes my hero hehehehe

The guy with the mod prob

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 11:45 am

Put the robots in this story, they say that they work for the order, or put the monkeys! And put some more commas.

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 12:51 pm

could you please break your text up a bit?

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 3:16 pm

killer this is made up Lol

Post Tue Jun 15, 2004 3:43 pm

Captured Pt. 7: The Plan

There was a blue cloud of plasma where Ozu and Von Claussen had given theyr'e lives, but we could still see the faint outline of two Nomad Battleships. Although we could see major damage on the battleships, we knew they were still a major threat. Just then 15 Nomad Battleships uncloaked and opened fire on the survey ships that were just returning. Juni was still in tears over Ozu and Von Claussen, Trent thaught he heard the pilot say somthing an inhabbitable moon when the radar screen started blinking with fifteen Nomad Battleships.
The new turrets that the sleeper ships had were armed and opened fire at the Nomads. Then the Nomads distroyed the moon that the Sirius aliance were going to inhabit. Then the Nomads quickly turned theyr'e guns on us, and just as fast as Trent and Juni saw blue light shoot from one of the Nomad guns, there was a loud explosion outside. We ran to one of the windows to check it out when there was another explosion. Trent and Juni ran to the docking bay and took two Ravenclaw 2600s and went outside. The Nomads had called for backup and now even more Battleships were comming and attacking our forces. The Liberty and the Rienland had landed on another moon the Nomads didn't as all remaining fighters kept them distracted. We met on the serface of an icy moon," This can't go on, we have to stop this running from everything." Juni complained. "Well acully, I think its tiime to start running one more time." " What are you saying?" "Im thinking about a return trip to Sirius."



End on Captured Pt.7

Edited by - killa on 6/16/2004 12:52:55 PM

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