Hmmm Malaga huh?? HEY I just got a good idea!! Guess whos on Malaga, an looking to pick holes in some Libertonians!!
Cant think? Well: Hes a criminal, hates Bounty Hunters, smokes Cardamine an drinks a drink know as Engien Degreaser!!
Havent guessed?

Bein an Outcast is about doin things you wanna do: Kill, Terrorise, Murder, Destroy, Smoke Cardamine, ya know, normal stuff.....

uhm, Robbie Williams

Nickless: I took it out because it didn't... uh... flow properly. It was great and funny and all... but it was too much on a short spur of time, if you know what I mean. It was a huge answer to a question, and it's hard to believe it isn't pre-meditated.
I even thought "Hey, if nickless reads this he'll wonder why I took it out," but it just didn't fit into the character of any, well, character.
I hope you don't mind. If you really want it back in, I'll do so. I call it... uh... "editor's privaledge."

And don't Ein's characters fly Drakes, not Dragons? I'm pretty sure of it...

Daniel doesn't have as much a problem with Blood Dragons anymore, actually. (Now, it's only GC and Outcasts he has a big problem with, but as they don't fly Dragons it's a moot point.) I just doubt that they carry spare parts like that around with them. Quigley never carried around a spare fin, did he?

So Daniel's patient. He'll choose to substitute a liberty fin on for now, then just get a new fin at Kyoto later on.

(Doh! Forgot about the collapsible fins. Let's just pretend they're a new feature that they'll cook up once gotten to Kyoto. )



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Why make your own mistakes when someone else has already made them for you?
-Learn from the skeletons floating in the piranha pool: NO SWIMMING!

Quigley spare an extra fin? Not chance, the whole premise I was on New Harlem was to get a new fin, but Danson had been a cheap skate. Terranova paid for the repair. But now that the West Point is in, it's sure to have Patriot parts. That's how Jimmy is going to repair the Dream

Well shoot, you were right about Seki. He does fly a Drake. Though a Drake fin is pretty close to the Dragon's. Can't be as bad as a Patriot fin.

Killzone, these "coming attractions" bits aren't going to get you into the story. You'll have to take the bull by the horns and dive in.

jedierrant

Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.

Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!

If I'm extremely lucky, I'll get to post tonight. No plot affecting stuff will be in it. More fleshing out of Johnson's character.

Ehhhhh, KillZone. I like what little things you have in your 'previews' of your presumably massive post (judging by the vast content as explained by your 'previews', it's going to be big), and if you can pull all of them together in a single, coherent post, then you'll be extra welcome here (at least by me). And your'e making me anxious, so hurry it up!! And I hope you use this as an opportunity to set your character in stone. We like characters set in stone.

I was saying that your character doesn't carry around an extra fin, and neither has my character.

Edit: We Has Update! (And a little streamlining, too)

Jeez! Stop typing such long posts, Nickless! The site only allows a certain length for each page! I'm forced to break up your posts into two parts.

Edited by - Whasp Commander on 26-09-2003 07:49:22

Edit#2: Oh, I just noticed something. Malys' posts are gone! Poof! It's kinda funny, but she just appears out of nowhere.

How about I edit one of your things, Nickless, then I'll post the change here, so you can edit it. Just to make it make sense.


Edited by - Whasp Commander on 26-09-2003 08:02:59

I've decided to plop it right after the breifing after regrouping in sigma.

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Michael walked to dock Two, wondering what he had got himself, and his friends, into.

Suddenly May called out again.

"Oh, Micheal, I forgot to tell you something. The Empress has requested that one of her handmaidens accompany you on your mission. I have already mentioned her. She is Malystryx. Watch yourselves around her, 'cause she's quite a looker. Hard to look away, if you know what I mean."

"I think I know who she is," Micheal responded, remembering the lady in the bar.

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If you think it should be changed to something else, please post it then I will change it.

Whasp, sorry about the long posts, I just get carried away sometimes There is just a lot I want to tell in each post. (actions, thoughts, stuff like that)

Brake 'em up as you see fit.

About the little adding you sugested, I'm cool with that. And about the line you took out, I guess you're right, I was just curious

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I was thinking about putting up a small add asking others to join the story. Dealing with NPC's is nice and all, but a few other good writers (3 or 4 perhaps) would be nice. More creativity and more variaty of characters is always nice. Maybe someone could play the enemy

I'm thinking 3 or 4 would be enough, 'cause with to many posters it could get confusing very soon.
Ofcourse, the ones who signed up in the original sign-up topic would have priority above others.

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Anybody?

Edited by - Nickless on 26-09-2003 12:55:25

Either late tonight... or tommorow morning... and, are there any Corsairs on Malaga? Its not essential but it provides a bit of fun... oh and, I hope your gonna enjoy the twist (What an understatement) cuase its bout to make things much much more complicated... and if thats too complicated, Ill just stick to reading it... well, until I get round to it....

Bein an Outcast is about doin things you wanna do: Kill, Terrorise, Murder, Destroy, Smoke Cardamine, ya know, normal stuff.....

No, go for it. Anything I post will probably be tomorrow. I'll wait.

Whasp, I really like the titles you made for the webstory.

jedierrant

Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.

Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!

goddamit!!!! i am gone for 1 or 2 ****ing days and this place canges !!!

BEWARE PETTY HUMAN, FOR YOU ARE CHEWY AND GOOD WITH KETCHUP!!!

leader of the dom kavosh dragons

Okay, I fixed a couple of Nickless' posts, par request.
(The last line makes sense now! )

Edit: Weird... my posts keep getting pushed down.

Anyway, No, there are no corsairs on Malaga. If you've read the webstory, you'd know.

And, thanks for the compliment of the titles.

Edited by - Whasp Commander on 27-09-2003 01:14:11

Pretty good, Malys. Hmm...I don't remember the guardians thing from FL. Are you talking about the Nomads? We kind of want to keep them out of the whole thing.

Anyway, keep going. I'm going to write some more, I'll get it up as soon as possible.

jedierrant

Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.

Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!

You know what I just realized? If a loyalist faction took over Kansai Research Station, they could hold out for a long time. *hint hint*

Edit: To clarify: I mean, it has a minefield around it except for one tiny entrance. It's also a high-tech research station. If you look at it, down at the bottom there's a long tube that must go to a plasma reactor (or something )

Anyway, Daniel's been there a couple times with his dad, in case you want to use it

Edited by - Whasp Commander on 27-09-2003 04:59:22