AHHHHH, SWEEET!! Good 'ol Whizzer's finally comin' back!

Yeah really, where in the hell is Manu? Does that mean your on vacation? You know, spitting on people?

Edited by - Jim Groovester on 29-09-2003 22:57:19

ok i got an idea for a fighter my char might steal/buy/borrow. its called the wyvern. its a cheap japanease version of the defender-XS. it looks like a dragon with its top changed around. it know has a short arm with an intergrated modified fireblade. this fire blade deals less damage but recharges quicker. it also has an extra set of fins in the top. it has 4 guns becides that, no torp point. and it is classified as a light fighter. because of the experimental nature of the tech (intergrates stolen rhienland/nomad tech this dosn't mean it has a cloak) it is very expensive to repair. this means if you lose a fin you won't get a new fin just out of some junk store. i will see if i can scrounge up some images for concept. if you want to suggest anything contact me at my msn groups website or email me at [email protected]

BEWARE PETTY HUMAN, FOR YOU ARE CHEWY AND GOOD WITH KETCHUP!!!

leader of the dom kavosh dragons

Nick or Lutz, which ever of you two writes the Alys part remember she did get a message from Lutz. I wrote in that Lutz gave Quigley a sealed message for Alys, and Quigley sent off the message before he left West Point.

I left it a sealed message because I wanted to give Lutz the chance to write something from Alys's point of view if he wanted. So Alys does know Lutz is alive, but beyond that she's clueless.

What a bummer for her. Her husband disappears for a while. Then she gets a message out of the blue digitally-stamped from West Point but written Lutz. Then everything explodes and West Point is demolished. Geez, you can only wonder what she would be thinking.

jedierrant

Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.

Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!

Nickless: It isn't me who doesn't like long posts - it's the board I host the html version on. Write them as long as you like .

I know Whasp, but I had to come up with some sort of an excuse for my short post

Jedi, I remember and that's a good id. I mailed Lutz last weeekend, but received no reply. So I think I'm gonna do it my self, if I still don't have an answer by the end of the week.

This post was just to keep the story going.

btw, anyone seen the application of Saiyan? How about it...

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The Titan Flies Like A Cow
"They're talking from here..." - Freddy Mercury '86

Juni: Oh yeah?!
Trent: uh, huh.
Juni: Oh.
Trent: yeah, great.

TLR: You can check out anytime you like, but you can never leave.

I say go for it. But Saiyan, are you going to be a villian or a Loyalist? Either way is your choice just write in here or post directly to the story.



jedierrant

Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.

Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!

Manu is Manhatten and I think I'm not there for me vacation....

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Knight who wears White

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How in the world does anyone get to Manhattan undetected?
You should write a post on how O'Connor got there to explain that. Realy, because you're char is one of the main characters. The story doesn't make sense if you just pop up on Manhattan.

And why did O'Connor have to go to Manhattan? Why did he go alone, knowing it was hostile? Why didn't he come along with Michael? He could have assisted in the fighting.

I think you should explain all that.
You're lucky my post didn't cover the Manhattan part yet or this would have gone wrong.

I'm not angry or anything White, just very surprised.

Villan sounds good to me (I think somebody said that the story was lacking them) so just give me a que and I'll jump in anytime you want!

Ok, White... I've been thinking about it and I think you have to do two things in order to make things work...

1. explain in the story that Manu = Manhattan. I think nobody got that one
2. post at a certain point, to your likeing, a bit where you tell us were you are exactly and how you got there. That way it makes sense and Lutz orI can keep you in mind while any of us is working on the Alys part.

@Saiyan: I can fit you in somewhere, but the others have a saying in it too. Just have to wait for their responses.

In my version you're probably hired by some dealer who felt he got screwed by Michael after a dubious trade.

Go fer it, Saiyan. Be a dastardly villain. Yes, dastardly, not petty like Batman villains (esp. the old ones), be EvIl!!!

Fine. No one remember my bio should read: Allighnment; Chaotic Evil Sonova... Bah... oh well, at least Ricardo has someone he can relate to...

BURN CORSAIR BURN!!!!

We didn't forget you Killzone, but now theirs two of you Three if you count in Terranova, but we're not realy sure about his evilness anymore

Btw, I think Killzone is the dastardly villian.
Saiyans char is more like the cold blooded hitman. Not sensitive to pleading and begging. But that's Saiyans choice of course

Edited by - Nickless on 30-09-2003 20:00:31

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