FL,The Return - And so it continues Ch.11! Updated 4/19/05

Fri Jan 14, 2005 11:14 am by bret bretonian

@Athena

In terms of going back through what i do, i have to say not that often. I believe that by keeping what i write as simple as possible, it will help younger readers to understand the story. There are often parts that i do like to fill in, but i find that building characters up over time gives perhaps a more "feel" to them. For example Halap in my first story, he came about halfway through and i spent much of the latter part of the story trying to persuade the reader that Halap, while he had lied to The Order, was in fact a great being who wanted nothing more than the survival of his friends. This is also why i try to have more speech than description. After much consideration, i am going to be a bit more graphic and hard hitting in this than i was the first one. I wanted Noir theme but the last time i tried that i got a negative response from it. I think my next seperate story, if it happens, will be a Noir love story set in the FL universe.

@Triyun

Thanks for telling everyone the ending

Fri Jan 14, 2005 7:56 pm by Killa

Hummm..... Mutant one-eyed space vampires. Can't wait.

Can you tell me what this is

----------------OO----------------

/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/

Clearly chestnuts roasting on an open fire.

Sat Jan 15, 2005 1:57 am by Sniper_Chicken

nahhh i prefer the beast...

Sun Jan 30, 2005 5:32 pm by ww2jacob

Wow, Bret. It sure has been a while. I came back through this looking for a new question for the fan fic trivia challenge when I noticed that you had added a new chapter. After your "disappearence" from the forum about two months ago, I didn't think that this story would ever be completed.

Well, I have said it before and I will say it again: it is really good to have you back with us, and I love your story.

Now to find a good question from here that Wilde won't be able to get.

Wed Feb 09, 2005 3:46 pm by Aravis

I havent visited here in forever....Nice story, keep it running

Fri Feb 18, 2005 7:33 pm by Beta-5

Bret this is awsome keep it up

I read sos and i thoght it was the end but WOW you got talent man! THIS IS SO GREAT!!!!!!!!!

Sat Feb 19, 2005 8:49 pm by Killa

Bret, c'mon. Where are you? Hello? I've tried to revive my fanfics twice sence you have been gone. Please come back and finish the story.

Can you tell me what this is

----------------OO----------------

/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/

Clearly chestnuts roasting on an open fire.

Sun Feb 20, 2005 8:45 am by Beta-5

PPPLLLEEEAAASSS

I ACANT WAIIIIIITTTTTTT IM GONNA EXPLODE.....

KABOOM!!!

just KIDIN'this is awsomee like a seaid befoore I CANT WAIT!...BOOM

Bret Are you there it has been 2 DAYS! Im In so much suspens ive stayed up ALL NIGHT (for 2 days) refreshing the page hoping for a new capter PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by - Beta-5 on 2/21/2005 4:09:42 PM

Tue Feb 22, 2005 12:14 am by bret bretonian

I'm always lurking somewhere Beta

I've got a big extension to the last chapter already on paper. When i get the time, i will post it.

Tue Feb 22, 2005 7:41 am by Killa

Good to see you bret, now if you could just tell us all what happened to Neuromancer I would be happy!

Tue Feb 22, 2005 8:41 am by bret bretonian

I wish i could. He was having a few health problems from what i understand. Don't worry, i get a sneaky feeling that he will complete his story.

Tue Feb 22, 2005 9:58 am by Beta-5

I STILL AND WAIT!!!!!!!!!(trails of screaming last word).................................................................. KKAAAAABBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM!

(darn i blew up agian!

)

this story is awsome keep it up

Wed Feb 23, 2005 2:24 pm by bret bretonian

Thanks to some certain enthusiasm of a fellow poster (not to name anyone Beta

) i have decided to post the continuation to chapter 7. I can't keep thanking you all enough for your support and for putting up with my laziness. Its not a lot but this is how Chapter 7 should have finished. Once i get some good ideas for chapter 8, i'll post it so check back often

Here it is, enjoy!

Chapter 7 - Continued

Trent, Juni and King ran as fast as they could to the docking bay

“What’s going on?” Shouted Sergio. The loud cracks on the station making it hard to hear anything but explosions.

“The base is under attack. Are you ready to leave!?” replied Trent shouting equally as loud.

“No, my brothers ship is not ready!”

“We can’t wait any longer. This place is about to fall apart!!” screamed Juni.

“But…” said Sergio

“No, we have to go! Now!”

Sergio signalled for his brother to follow him to his ship. Trent, Juni and king locked themselves up in theirs.

“This is going to be close!” Shouted Trent as the 5 ships flew out of Freeport 10’s docking bay back into open space.

The explosion came shortly after followed by an eerie calm. The 5 ships came about and looked at the ruins of Freeport 10.

The debris and dust was all that remained. No ships were being read in the area.

“Juni, are you picking up any weapons readings?” Trent asked.

“No. Nothing. Not a single trace” replied Juni. “Who would do something like this”

“Maybe you should stay away from all Freeport’s from now on Trent. There won’t be anything left if you keep visiting them” said King trying to break the tension.

“Very funny King. Lets get moving. I don’t think we are going to want another close encounter”

Edited by - Bret Bretonian on 2/23/2005 2:24:37 PM

Wed Feb 23, 2005 2:34 pm by Killa

Un-freakin-beleivable! This is just too awesome to describe. I don't know if it was exitement that made me do this, but I actually laughed out loud at that joke King made at the end. I'm probably just exited about reading this, and the comments some of the other people have made about my new fanfic.

@Bret, were you sick or something? Or were you just being lazy again?

OMG! Eather 34 or 36 days untill Splinter Cell: Chaos Theory!

Wed Feb 23, 2005 2:42 pm by bret bretonian

100% laziness killa. 100% laziness

Important Message

You are browsing the archived Lancers Reactor forums. You cannot register or login.
The content may be outdated and links may not be functional.

To get the latest in Freelancer news, mods, modding and downloads, go to
The-Starport