Me? By the way heltak, it would be impossible to write all of it at once. SOME PEOPLE, unlike you, have lives. We don't have time to write and entire 6 page creme 'da la creme best fanfic ever kinda thing. And, are my parts REALLY that bad?

Ohhh! Beu-tiful! Preeety! How do I blow it up?

well you added an extra character for one thing and it seemed a bit strange....

yeha try to follow pSYCHOS format and not add characters or i cant intertwine the three good ones
i mean, psycho didnt have trent or juni or vonclaussen, they were heroes, but in orillians vonclaussen is the baddie
plz try to follow psycho or his fanfic cant have the honor to be in a cool story


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Not seen yours yet Fire. What I'm saying is people make small posts and lots of them when they could just do one larger post or even two.

Ugh never mix Fanfictions fool it's the worst idea possible as each author brigns something new to the table and it can't be used unless they were working in tandem from the start.

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You could no more evade my wrath... than you could your own shadow!

im not going to until each one loses interest or they stop alltogether
then my work begins


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The wolfy types like a cow

We were so shocked at this sudden occurrence that we almost forgot we were still cloaked. We sat there in silence, watching this huge ship fly out of the jump hole. It headed towards the place where my convoy had been attacked. Silently, we followed it, trying not to get too close. When it reached the point where my convoy had been destroyed, it vanished. It had cloaked. This turn of events was even more worrying, we now knew there was a huge ship flying around unnoticed, who knows there could be hundreds of them flying around and no-one would notice…

Suddenly a huge beam of purple light seemed to fill the space around us. We could just make out the ship behind it, it seemed to be firing some huge cannon, not at us, but at the navy patrol that was passing through the system. We had to get out of there and warn the governments, otherwise there would be no chance for mankind. We quickly and quietly flew away, to Bretonia space. We landed at Planet New London, where Orillion contacted the Osiris and told them what we had seen. Juni, likewise contacted Liberty. I couldn’t yet believe it, I was now in the middle of this, just like my heroes had been against the nomads…

c'mon you havent given up allready have you!!??


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The wolfy types like a cow

Yeh, yeh, hold your horses, I do have other things to do other than this

i cant! my horses are allready dragging me across the country


this is my world; it goes round and round and round
The wolfy types like a cow

OK, I will take over from here (for one post), The juggernaught was clearly going to wipe us out, whether we liked it or not. When I got back to the osiris, orillion sent me to new londen to tell them about the invasion. The queen herself came to listen to my story and warning. When I was done, the queen ordered that patrols were to be tripled and that if nomads were sighted, all patrols in the system must destroy them. Releived, I returned to the osiris, only to find the juggernaught attacking it! The fighters were swarming it, but it was having little or no effect on the behemoth. the laser cannon it used to destroy that patrol was rotating, and firing on all in it's path. All of the fighters were firing torpedoes too, but nomad ships seem to take less damage rather than more damage. Then orillion, juni, trent, and king all came. Orillion said "We can't fight this thing, retreat into the battleship and prepare to leave the system." We followed, not knowing whether we would be safe or not in the new system...

"Death to ZugZug!"

Edited by - Scout29 on 2/20/2004 5:57:23 PM

Once aboard the Osiris, I discovered that the Order had been secretly developing a new type of engine, a sort of 'jump drive' that could get a ship from one system to another in a matter of seconds. One of these prototype engines had been installed on the Osiris, and we were going to use it to jump to a new, undeveloped system that had been discovered on the edge of the Sirius sector. I held my breath as it charged up, before a deafening blast shook the entire ship...

This is nice. Please continue man.

Just a suggestion. Someone should make like a 5 chapter book or something.

Please correct me if I'm wrong.

lol some1 allready has a ten chapter book, some capters have parts (eg chapter 2 part one, chapter 2 part 2
its not really a book tho, just a bunch of chapters...thats one of the fanfics i will be combining....i noticed my last post is not here.

well, in the other fanfic (ten chapter one) the order combined forces with the outcasts FYI
and they made the hispania into a juggarnaught class destroyer/carrier
so.......im kinda wondering what would happen to the osiris, whetehr i will have to add something when i combine the two, or if you do something.....or i could add the osiris in the other story somewhere.....as for orillians; i'll have alot more work to do lol


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The wolfy types like a cow