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Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:20 pm
Hey Killzone, I think you should make Killzone your nickname, because what self respecting Outcast would name their kid Killzone?
That aside, I think your character and my character could be come very good friends (being criminals you know). But there would be ideological issues to deal with.
I read your edit, Nickless. A Wolfhound! A Wolfhound! Not a Bloodhound! A Wolfhound!
Edited by - Jim Groovester on 21-09-2003 21:22:05
That aside, I think your character and my character could be come very good friends (being criminals you know). But there would be ideological issues to deal with.
I read your edit, Nickless. A Wolfhound! A Wolfhound! Not a Bloodhound! A Wolfhound!
Edited by - Jim Groovester on 21-09-2003 21:22:05
Mon Sep 22, 2003 1:03 am
I agree with Jim, Killzone. You need to give a real name. Killzone is a cool callsign and nickname, but what would your superiors, the Dons call you?
jedierrant
Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.
Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!
jedierrant
Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.
Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!
Mon Sep 22, 2003 8:00 am
Yes, your character name should not be killzone. Think of something hispanic for your first name. First and last. We may never use it, but having the background helps give depth, actually. It's one of those things that subconciously affect authors - if the background is there, we'll write as if the background is there, and therefore the story feels like there's a lot more going on than apparant. Names are just a tiny bit of this.
Anyway, you've already been sort-of introduced. It's suggested to take it from there.
The rest of the survivors are going to try to flee to Kyoto base in a couple of days because the Rheinland forces are most likely gonna drop by that base and nuke it. Unless you have your own agenda, it's likely that you'll be encouraged to help escort the survivors. At least, that's what my character is doing.
Oh, the HTML Version is updated.
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Why make your own mistakes when someone else has already made them for you?
-Learn from the skeletons floating in the piranha pool: NO SWIMMING!
Edited by - Whasp Commander on 22-09-2003 09:19:35
Anyway, you've already been sort-of introduced. It's suggested to take it from there.
The rest of the survivors are going to try to flee to Kyoto base in a couple of days because the Rheinland forces are most likely gonna drop by that base and nuke it. Unless you have your own agenda, it's likely that you'll be encouraged to help escort the survivors. At least, that's what my character is doing.
Oh, the HTML Version is updated.
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Why make your own mistakes when someone else has already made them for you?
-Learn from the skeletons floating in the piranha pool: NO SWIMMING!
Edited by - Whasp Commander on 22-09-2003 09:19:35
Mon Sep 22, 2003 9:30 am
Now I have Character Profiles!
They're not up-to-date, but who cares?
(And, anyone like my new sig?
)
And for those who wonder: I'll make the html version completely up-to date on every finished page. One more post then I'll make it completely up-to date.
Edited by - Whasp Commander on 22-09-2003 10:31:51
They're not up-to-date, but who cares?
(And, anyone like my new sig?
)
And for those who wonder: I'll make the html version completely up-to date on every finished page. One more post then I'll make it completely up-to date
.
Edited by - Whasp Commander on 22-09-2003 10:31:51
Mon Sep 22, 2003 11:52 am
Yeah, your sig is quite good.
I saw the profiles and got a minor comment, how about naming the profiles after the most commonly used name. You called the profile for Michael Profile - Armstrong I seriously doubt anyone knows how the hell Armstrong is.
Same goes for Morlone's profile.
And an update for Michael's profile, he escaped from Cal.Minor. Would you be so kind to change that? Thanks.
I saw the profiles and got a minor comment, how about naming the profiles after the most commonly used name. You called the profile for Michael Profile - Armstrong I seriously doubt anyone knows how the hell Armstrong is.
Same goes for Morlone's profile.
And an update for Michael's profile, he escaped from Cal.Minor. Would you be so kind to change that?
Thanks. Mon Sep 22, 2003 12:48 pm
Oops, Whasp, I'm going to single out Quigley's past and post it here or email it to you. I know you got it from the sign in, but it's woeful wrong on its time now. I'll fix it and update it through the story.
You should put the character by what he is know by. Though, it was interesting to remember what Lutz's, Michael's, and Daniel's last names were.
jedierrant
Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.
Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!
You should put the character by what he is know by. Though, it was interesting to remember what Lutz's, Michael's, and Daniel's last names were.
jedierrant
Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.
Play UT, and you'll leave crying Volun-Tears!
Mon Sep 22, 2003 4:20 pm
Never heard about Anubis? Don't get me wrong, but did you forget to mention that you are blind? j\k j\k. but All the echos are\were Anubis. And Connors ship was an Anubis too
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Knight who wears White
www.thestuffnetworks.com
\ Greater God /
--Agree With ARCON Year--
Edited by - White Knight on 22-09-2003 17:35:41
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Knight who wears White
www.thestuffnetworks.com
\ Greater God /
--Agree With ARCON Year--
Edited by - White Knight on 22-09-2003 17:35:41
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