Great work Whasp. I'll get a read later this week...

I meet up with Lutz every now and then on MSN, he's kinda involved in all kinda stuff right now, but he keeps promising me he will check it out.
I think I will notify him of the word version, it makes catching up a bit easier.
I haven't hear a thing from CptSavage, but i saw he posted a few bit's in other topic's yesterday, so maybe he's reading this....

Anyway, Malys, do you wan't me to change my post to fit yours? I had a slightly diferent idea about your char, but I'm sure you noticed that

Edit: Just read your post Malys and I have a few comments.
First of all, Lutz is maried and is not going to fall in love with you.
Second, try to read the previous posts a bit, you will find out that Terranova isn't the friendly companionship you give him credit for
And last, Lutz, Michael and Arrigoni are going to Liberty in thirty minutes, It's ok, if you come along, I can slip you in somewhere, but are you sure you are sober in thirty minutes?

Don't worry to much about these things, we're just helping you to start up so you can roll along with the story more smoothly, but give us your thoughts on these matters.

Edit#2: Don't write yourself into the mission to Sugarland everyone. I think five of us can do the job Remember, it's supposed to be lowprofile and a large group like this can certainly alert Lib. a lot easier.
Also a request, please be a litle patient with the story, I have a special plan for Michael and Lutz. So write it to Sugarland and perhaps the escape, that's ok. But once in space Michael and Lutz have to brake off.
I hope I'm not asking to much, but I think this is going a bit to fast now. It's good to keep this thing going, but wait at a certain moment to give others a chance to post aswell.
I for one don't have a lot of time the rest of the week, so I probably won't be able to put something up before Friday.

Edited by - Nickless on 16-09-2003 09:20:22

Edited by - Nickless on 16-09-2003 12:06:41

Malys, don't take this the wrong way. It's a bit overwhelming trying to stay within canon when you have no idea what the others are about to do. Like I just did to Jim. He hadn't posted for a while so I thought I'd help out, I ended up stepping on his toes. Sorry, Jim. The whole key to webfic (I've done a bunch) is to adapt, adapt, and adapt.

Oh and Nick, Lutz doesn't have to fall in love, but faced with the beauty that Malys supposed has, what man could controll his jaw? If Malys comes around Quigley, Rachel's going to kick his jaw-dropping butt for looking. (Lucky for him, he's bed ridden for the moment.)

Jedi, yeah I just tought of that on my way home

I'm not able to post for a while (going on another trip to France {I hate it[the traveling})so please don't kill me in the meantime. I should be back after couple of days, just to let you know.

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hey cummon a group of 6 wont be that obvious more than a group of 5 (anyway i need to see how you use my char) also you need my expertise for getting drunk and celibrating

BEWARE PETTY HUMAN, FOR YOU ARE CHEWY AND GOOD WITH KETCHUP!!!

leader of the dom kavosh dragons


Edited by - malystryx on 17-09-2003 00:40:34

Party is good

The mission was originally for three people, namely Michael (the leader of the mission), Lutz and Arrigoni. but with you and Johnson, I say it's good too.
Again I ask you to read the previous posts, better yet, the hole thing, through. You will find that Michael, Lutz and Arrigoni are together a lot and have become good friends and know each others strenghts and weaknesses. Therefore they make up a good team.

I wanna say again (and I promise it's the last time) You can't jump in just like that. the story is well underway, a new character would require a proper introduction and cannot "invite" himself/herself to join the major part of the storyline.
The way Jim Groovster introduced his char Johnson is an example of how to do that. He placed himself in the ship as a prisoner and let O'Connor deal with him. He has become a part of the story that way and can now decide more major actions wich involve him and perhaps someone else.

I think we still need to sort out the introduction part of your char. cause it's not adding up the way it is now. It only takes a post or two from your side to introduce yourself. Since we now gave you a part in the story (GC contact) I think you're inbut try to hold back a bit.

I hope I don't offend you or discourage you in anyway, I too want more chars in the story, but I just wanted to get this straight.
If anyone thinks I'm wrong about this, please tell me.

Edit: Don't worry Malys, I'll take you along and give you a nice role in all of this

Edited by - Nickless on 17-09-2003 01:02:40

k, how about after the sugerland raid my char could kinda cum in slowly (like occationally joining on missions, then finally joining?) also i dont mind the other guy's intro. ohh yes, my char lives in her dragon (bunk in hold) and can carry a passanger.

BEWARE PETTY HUMAN, FOR YOU ARE CHEWY AND GOOD WITH KETCHUP!!!

leader of the dom kavosh dragons

edit: k

Edited by - malystryx on 17-09-2003 01:33:41

any chance of me getting a averice chain guns or a storm blade? i could salvage it? or maybe another proto weapon? hehe if not just ignore me

BEWARE PETTY HUMAN, FOR YOU ARE CHEWY AND GOOD WITH KETCHUP!!!

leader of the dom kavosh dragons

I'm up to the thirteenth page. Once again, the story can be found HERE.
(That's page four.)

(Oh, does anybody like my little description thingies? To get them, hold the mouse over the link to the individual pages.)


@malys: where do you live, because it doesn't look like english is your native language.
Also, I would think that a (presumably) ancient member of an even more ancient race would have a bit more... uh... control or discipline over their habits in regards to socializing.
And about the Avarice/stormblade? I'd say not yet. (Isn't your loadout good enough already? Even I just (secretly ) Maybe an avarice, if you're lucky. And definitely not a stormblade, as they require a specialized weapons testing platform with specialized slots.

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i live in america (just not a very literate part... yes i am talking about college)

in regards to your second statement: well they come from a society completly differnt from ours. so they wouldn't understand our culture. well i wouldn't mind a averice (i think its a cool gun)

BEWARE PETTY HUMAN, FOR YOU ARE CHEWY AND GOOD WITH KETCHUP!!!

leader of the dom kavosh dragons


Edited by - malystryx on 17-09-2003 03:28:14

You like a da Avarice gun, eh? I own all here buddy people!

I'm going to have to pull back for a couple of days. Heavy class load and tests coming up. I'll try to post this weekend.

jedierrant

Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.

Yei! Twenty Five Pages Done!

I'm almost up-to date, guys!

Oh, if anybody finds something bad (from tiny spelling mistakes that I've missed, to making your character say completely wrong) don't hesitate to plop down a reply.

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Edited by - Whasp Commander on 17-09-2003 07:16:57

Don't worry Whasp, you can count on that

Whasp, you shouldn't have too much trouble finding a Dragon fin. The Blood Dragons and Gc are there. Getting one away from those resource-strapped groups will be trouble.

jedierrant

Saving damsels in distress,
Defending the defenseless,
Fighting for the underdog,
Don Quixote in an X-wing.