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A new play by .... You!!
This is where you can discuss your homework, family, just about anything, make strange sounds and otherwise discuss things which are really not related to the Lancer-series. Yes that means you can discuss other games.
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Sortof a matrix-romeoandjuliet-half life cross.
Now that would be a weird story imho.
Pluging Romeo and Juliet into the Half-life Matrix...Kinda silly
@Arania, how's your writing coming? Join me at my side young apprentice and we will rule the Off-Topic forums as complete strangers!
Looks like we have a Copy-cat at work here.
You only forgot the Muahahahahahahaaa sS
Edit: Damn spelling.
Daft Vader - I am your father.
sS - Noooooooo! I demand a DNA-test.
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They call me spammer, but you may call me Master.
It's better to chase a rabbit then to catch a hare...
No that's right, vader didn't laugh, he just rasps: Join me Luke *rasp* and together *rasp* we will rule the universe *rasp*.
And Palpatine's laugh was more like hehehehehihihihahahahaha, then Hehehehehehahahahaha imho.
Edit: Damn spelling.
Daft Vader - I am your father.
sS - Noooooooo! I demand a DNA-test.
---------------------------------------------------------------
They call me spammer, but you may call me Master.
It's better to chase a rabbit then to catch a hare...
And Palpatine's laugh was more like hehehehehihihihahahahaha, then Hehehehehehahahahaha imho.
Edit: Damn spelling.
Daft Vader - I am your father.
sS - Noooooooo! I demand a DNA-test.
---------------------------------------------------------------
They call me spammer, but you may call me Master.
It's better to chase a rabbit then to catch a hare...
@Arania, I don't know if you want people posting to your thread yet, because not all of the story is posted. So I'll post my initial thoughts here, until you say it is okay to intercede. Good start so far, if a bit too fast of a read, you skim over a lot of character and story development. But I think everybody knows at least a little bit about the posters in the story so it doesn't much matter.
My favourite bit so far was
It did sorta feel like that.
Sir Spectre
My favourite bit so far was
‘This is how we do it here at TRL, Sp/der’ said Spectre ‘I’m a pro’ He was then hit on the head by another can of spam thrown by mullet.
It did sorta feel like that.
Sir Spectre
Yeah, i know i skipped a fair bit of it, but some of it really wouldnt fit well.
You can post your thoughts in-between chapters, i'm going to link a competed copy when i'm done.
I'm trying to subtly alter it to incorporate more humor, rather than the actual spamfest that it was.
(truth be told, i was actually quite amused by the sheer size of mu's spam posts, for some reason )
Hope to have chapter two done soon.
You can post your thoughts in-between chapters, i'm going to link a competed copy when i'm done.
I'm trying to subtly alter it to incorporate more humor, rather than the actual spamfest that it was.
(truth be told, i was actually quite amused by the sheer size of mu's spam posts, for some reason )
Hope to have chapter two done soon.
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