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Poetry

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Post Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:53 pm

Poetry

Untitled

Spring grass caressed by breeze.
Winds along side a path,
carved in stone,
set in blood.

Stick huts in a circle,
hounded by gales,
stand beside great,
spires of bone and ash.

A wise man proclaiming,
humanity is right,
stands opposite a maiden,
wreathed in sorrow and loss.

Such is the fate of Empires.

Moments of joy snatched away.
Moments of kindness,
repayed a hundred fold.
Moments of happiness, treasured.

Such is our fate.

What am I talking about here? Which period in time? When? Where? What else am I saying? What is the point of stanza 5 and 6?

And so I went to war,
And there I died
yet still I wander.

I see my wife,
children.
Yet they do not know.

When I served in Hell,
that release to Heaven was not,
granted to me.

I was released to a Hell
of my own making.
Respite, I know it not.

So as all you brash,
fool hardy youth.
Rush to swell the ranks.

Consider what is Hell,
and consider how I have
suffered.

Then consider that,
I was meant to be the
victor.

Something else I just poked up.
-~-~-~-~
You have called down the Thunder. Now reap the Whirlwind.
Warning! In the intrest of safety it is advisable to keep Heltak away from Fire and Flames!
He that humbleth himself wishes to be exalted.
Hope in reality is the worst of all evils because it prolongs the torments of man.
Friedrich Nietzsche

Edited by - Heltak on 9/17/2004 6:22:52 PM

Post Fri Sep 17, 2004 5:30 pm

pretty good i have been know to dablle in that area

Post Sat Sep 18, 2004 12:54 am

its really good
will we be seeing more of those?

Post Sun Sep 26, 2004 7:09 pm

Heltak asked


What am I talking about here? Which period in time? When? Where? What else am I saying? What is the point of stanza 5 and 6?


OK. I'll take some wild guesses.....

1) What: Mourning and the burning of the dead in a pyre.
2) Which / When: Pictish or Celtic times in Western Europe but it also could be today.
3) Where: Since you never seem to think of anyplace else, Scotland
4) What else: War was/is hell, and the ghost of a dead soldier tells his tale with a twist,
5) Point: They are the fulcrum that leverages the descriptions of loss and desolation at the beginning of your prem into the resolution and surprise ending that follow.

Post Wed Sep 29, 2004 11:33 am

Indy which poem are you referring to there?

Post Wed Sep 29, 2004 11:37 am

Which?

Isn't what you posted all one thing

Post Wed Sep 29, 2004 11:49 am

No it;s two poems. That's why the questions seperate them.

Post Wed Sep 29, 2004 3:09 pm

Ho....kaaaaaaay.........

Then are the questions for the one above titled "Untitled" or the one below which is just plain untitled?

Post Wed Sep 29, 2004 3:35 pm

The 1st one

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