You know, if you aren't form America, you can E-mail me your story in your native language, I can run it through a translator, and correct any grammar/usage/mechanics that don't work in English. Just wanted to offer my services. (Also: No viruses, spyware, adware, trojans, etc. GUARANTEED!)
Although yes, I must say, this is a complete failure. I'm sorry if I sound discouraging, but that is my opinion, and I cannot think of anything else I can say. We all apreciate good entertainment here at TLR, and good literature too. Don't bother us with this. If you want to put something like this on TLR, then put it in "Off Topic". Then, you wouldn't get so much criticism. (It's what you expect in Off Topic, right?) This is not worthy of the Fan Ficiton forum. I'm sorry, but it isn't. Remember this the next time you think of starting threads here.
Although yes, I must say, this is a complete failure. I'm sorry if I sound discouraging, but that is my opinion, and I cannot think of anything else I can say. We all apreciate good entertainment here at TLR, and good literature too. Don't bother us with this. If you want to put something like this on TLR, then put it in "Off Topic". Then, you wouldn't get so much criticism. (It's what you expect in Off Topic, right?) This is not worthy of the Fan Ficiton forum. I'm sorry, but it isn't. Remember this the next time you think of starting threads here.