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Post Tue Dec 20, 2005 4:41 pm

Heh Just Wanted to post this

Freelancer 2


The Intro Is When The Nomads Came Into a Secret System unknown to even their leader, This system was The Terrence System Run by 2 secret factions, The Terrence Team and the Saiya-jins Those too teams wanted revenge because the last people that "owned" the sirus system did the same thing that happened to the Nomads so doese teams teamed up to distroy the Exact thing that holds the Sirus System togeter, the core of it, The New York System


(3 Months Later)


The Order Has Gotten Bored Since they had to wait so most of them went in to check if the Nomads are doing good in there because their scanners have picked up somthing unknown and weird then it looked like they where in a Jump Gate and then the next thing they know is alot of new ships, a Nomad Bomber, Someone Flying in space with a Yellow Arua Covering then Bang their in the Freelanceing World in the sky Orillion Servived and went off to tell trent and the others




Mission 1:

You start with a Anubis because you are part of the order


Oriilion Comes and tells Trent What Happened And The Mission /is To Find The Cloaked Planet to find the cloak Device


Part One, Getting Blowen Off By Nomads

Part two, Nomads Still Coming

Part 3, To To trade Lane

Part 4: Distroy the Nomad Fleet

Part 5: Dock


Mission 1 B:


Part 1: Cloak

Part 2: De Cloak And Fire Super Misspitos

Part 3: Blow Up The Nomad Base

Par 4: Defend Juni


Trent told Orillion that he distroyed their super base but Orillion said they are more but you have to get stronger Because They have a whole other system from that hole you made and they have gotten stronger since last time Then Trent Said So When is the next guy who will somehow come here and show me an artifact... then sombody did have an artifact that had electisity and Red Arua around it

Mission 2:

Orillion Wants Trent, Juni, and King to Come To Mannhation For a mission to distroy the Red Bomber and the fleet Shild Covering it

1: Run From The Saiya-jins

2: Zap Their Heads Off

3: Beat The Whole Terrence System Fleet

4: Eat

5: Use The Bathroom

6: Sleep While Enimies Blow Your Ship Off

7: Distroy The Red Bomber



Mission 3:

Anoter Mission To Distroy a Fleet So Orillion Knows This is The End so He Will Help, Then Trent Goes Out Side and then almost gets blasted 16 times by a nomad and then some one comes out from nowhere then kicks him in the sky then ran up to him but then trent smacks him back into the building then said NOT THIS TIME!!! Then sombody came and said "Zaker!" Then Trent Was Electrocuted Again. the next thing he knows is getting woken up by a Nomad, The Leader Of the Terrence Team, and the Strongest Saiyan, Goku. Then Trent Said What The??!?! A Nomad?? a Saiyan?? a Terrence??? then the Nomad said You Can call me Solo then Terrence said that is my brothers name then Trent said so your here to help right? then they said yes then Trent said why does the weird stuff always happen to me... then the Nomad Solo said I have a plan to get passed the rest of the Nomads but it is Tricky

Objective 1: Launch to space

The Nomad Leader said "this is Nomad Alpha 16 to Nomad Beta 4 is your mission compleate" then the Nomad Solo said "Yes Edision Trent has been controled" then Nomad Leader said "ok you are Cleared to dock" Then Every one Starts Shooting Every Body Else exsept Goku and Terrence They use Ki energy "WARNING WARNING SECTOR BREACHED BRING REINFORCEMENTS THESE PEOPLE ARE STRONG AND ARMED THEY ARE OURS WORKING WITH TRENT WARNING WARNING" Then Nomad Leader Said "so you think you can tri... augh" Trent Said: JUNI!! KING!! ORILLION!!! What are you doing here? then Juni said "We didn't see you for so long that we went in space our selfs then we saw a Nomad Bomber Base that Decloaked like it was offline and distroyed then We Heard the Alarm then we knew you where in there But you Where with a Nomad??" then trent said "yes this time someone just Zaped me again then they woke me up" then the Solo Nomad said "we can use this base as out own home base I can build a Cloaking device


To Be Comtinude

Post Wed Dec 21, 2005 10:34 am

What on whole mother Earth is THIS!?

Post Wed Dec 21, 2005 5:37 pm

What country are you from?
I sure as hell hope it isnt the United States.

Post Fri Dec 23, 2005 2:31 am

the whole concept sucks. not only that, your grammar sucks with all the misplaced punctuation and run-on sentences.

seriously, "saiyans" in Freelancer? don't you think thats a little bit too much?

some people say that crime didn't exist before GTA

Post Fri Dec 23, 2005 7:53 am

and you are a Stupid Fart Face

Post Fri Dec 23, 2005 1:47 pm

lol look who's talking

some people say that crime didn't exist before GTA

Post Sat Dec 24, 2005 10:25 pm

Hey man, uncalled for.

>^-_-^<

My young kitten sleeps
Sleepy from overeating
Global Bunny lost

Post Sun Dec 25, 2005 4:33 am

Well....while I applaud your attempt, the storyline is no good. Too many crossovers from other series (Saiyans in FL? I think not), and the missions would be WAY too advanced. I mean, in FL, the first mission is to wipe out weak Rogues and blow up a base that is vastly under-defended. Starting out with a mission involving taking down a fleet is too advanced, too soon.

Second, and this is just coz I'm curious, what country are you from? If you're from a non-English speaking country, I can understand why your post is....disjointed.

And finally, give some more thought to this. Wipe the Saiyans and these 'Terrence' characters out, add some more stuff before the Nomads, a bit more plot, and this would be great. Keep trying.

Post Sun Dec 25, 2005 9:58 pm

*hangs head in shame*

UGH! SAIYANS IN FL?

some people say that crime didn't exist before GTA

Post Mon Dec 26, 2005 3:45 am

What on whole mother earth is a Sayan?

Post Mon Dec 26, 2005 4:49 pm

some sort of super-human in the Dragonball shows....

eh, really. that does not belong in FL

some people say that crime didn't exist before GTA

Post Wed Dec 28, 2005 9:40 pm

jeez, rioteer, give zeta a break. he tried his best.

although, zeta, you might want to use a spell check.

Post Thu Dec 29, 2005 2:38 am

Ermmmm..............

Post Thu Dec 29, 2005 5:14 am

I'll try to be friendly now.

Next time you post something you might want to try out writing it on Microsoft Word first and then copy it and post it here. That's what I do all the time, although I use British English.

Oh, and use Scottish English.

Post Tue Mar 07, 2006 3:29 pm

Hey there Zeta Leader, I'd just like to know if I can use your fic for something I am working on? I obviously won't claim it as my own and will add a disclaimer saying it is yours. If you don't reply I will assume it doesn't matter and use it anyway. Thanks.

Also, to anybody else. Keep an eye out for my new fic, which is currently being planned (don't worry, COTH will still be updated). It will be something never before seen on TLR! For now, your only hint is 'MFT3K'. If you get it and understand its connection to this thread, then please don't spoil it for the others, email me instead.

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