As i said before, nice story, i love this kinda stuff :p

apologies for what looked like a hijack earlier. just couldn't help myself.

back to the fic, there should be some mod to clear out the visitor's comments once in a while so the fic remains in the majority.

Noone cares about Kusari and Bretonia. They're crap and boring. If you do have to include them though, I suggest mentioning
1. Ozu
2.Tobias and Quintainne
3.The Cambridge research institute(artifacts gone crazy and start causing odd things to happen?)
4.In Kusari, you could mention the Planetary Arch in... Tohuku isn't it?
5.The Hispania. It ain't in Kusari or Bretonia but it's still brilliant. Imagine it...
Corsair Titans. Outcast Sabres. Fighting side by side to defend Sirius!!!

hey orillian i got a brilliant plan!! but i need ur permission to do it! im going to get all 3 of the fanfics and conbine them together!! just dont use the hispania idea


this is my world; it goes round and round and round
The wolfy types like a cow

Yeah, go ahead. But give me credits, or else...

Can i make this into one long post on my forums bud?

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http://www.cardamine.net/ - New and improved, with downloads, and a forum!

@Cardamine: I just saw the thread you made on your forums, and i thought "what", when i saw my own fan fic Nive that you liked it, and yeah, you can take it

Time: Nine days after the Rheinland invasion
Location: Alaska system

The ride to Alaska had taken two hours, under that time i had got some rest, and inspected the weapons and missiles on the ship. I had jumped out pretty close to two stations, where one was under construction. So, Liberty where working on something here. But what?
One of the stations where looking like pretty much like a big rock, and a second one was built with one big platform, where you could dock, and some kind of gas that was pouring out of holes on a ring that went round and round. I tried to hail the rock-like one, wich was under construction. Nothing. Then i tried to hail the second one. From there i got an encrypted message:
"SOS! SOS! Failing. Oxygen emptyj.5mg,dkdjdjxkxja.fe5,fkdf"
Something was very wrong, and i flew as fast as i could to the station. Fourtnatley, the docking computers where online, so i could get in. I landed my Dagger in one of the hangers, and got out. It was creepy outside the ship, and the whole station smelled... death. To be secure, i took a oxygen tube form the ship, and a very heavy laser rifle. Then i stepped over to the Traders section. Nothing. When i got to the Ship Dealer, i saw a very nice Sabre.
"Neat!" i said, and smiled. I first looked around the ship, after bombs and such devices. Nothing. I started the ship, wich was fully functionall, and got back to my own ship, and loaded everything on it onto a hover transport. Then i loeded it back into the new ship, wich was much more comfortable, and had three seats. It even had a combined sleeping room and toilet and a very small kitchen, with some food. It also had two rifles in the cockpit. Could be usefull. I took the heaviest one of the two rifles, and got to the Bar of the station. In there, several people was hanging from the roof, dead. I saw a young man, and a women, and even a little girl, that not oculd be more than six or seven years. Who the hell did something like this? I was about to walk out of there, when i rememered the two adults hanging dead. Trent and Juni. I couldn't be true. Trent had retired after the Nomad Incident. He had retired to Manhattan, where he had a recidence. And the girl looked a little like both of them. I walked around them, and saw a projector in the back of them. They where just holograms... But who wanted to project pictures of Trent and Juni, hanging n the roof of a station, in a locked and unknown system?

oooh now its a scary story
and yeah, of course ill give u credits; so how much? 20? 30 million?


this is my world; it goes round and round and round
The wolfy types like a cow

I more thought about "Made by Orillion".

@Orillion, it would be more like this

special thanks to...

and somewhere below it would say Orillion

i think..... not sure


- edit; back to the story, if i was the person in the fan fiction, i would upgrade the dagger, with some extra hull and some extra thrusters from the sabre... co'z the dagger is way more agile... if he used also the powercore only it can be ouloaded with some real gunz
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Edited by - DragonBreath on 2/21/2004 7:13:45 AM

i was thinking of:
don't give me the gratitude, i only put it together from three different fan fictions. thanks to Orillian and pSYCHO for letting me use their parts
i still need to ask moby if i can use his part




this is my world; it goes round and round and round
The wolfy types like a cow

Okay, it's going off the topic. Orillion, please continue. I wanna read more. Its a nice story.

Please correct me if I'm wrong.

tell me he gets that neat sabre. btw where can you fit a kitchen and a bathroom in a sabre? its just a dagger with side fin kinda thing.