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Freelancer: Aftermath, writing the story

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Post Fri Nov 28, 2003 7:49 am

awsome stuff u have there
but maybe u can redo chapter 1 a bit
the f*cks and the sh*ts and the b*tchs and the wtf damages the overall quality of the chapter


so ur making a book out of this?

something is messed up here
i went to see what users were online and i saw 2 clonetrooper119's...wierd
one was on 10 minutes, and the other was on 2 minutes!?!?!?

Post Fri Nov 28, 2003 10:42 pm

The idea is that its not me doing this, yet we have to good writters Ximain and Sword_of_Ice. If in last chapter Ximain brought us to Jaggernout battle ship you have to start from there.

Its fun to write this chapters, Its intriguing to read them because you never know what is going to be next or how it ends.

If people like the idea and want to participated and TLR will open forum for us its could be great. Yet we have it hosted on our site, everyone is welcome to post your story. No need to register.


http://www.stand.at/sword

Post Sat Nov 29, 2003 6:06 am

I haven't read through all of the posts on this topic, but i'll tell you what, the stories over there are real good. Errrrr... and thats it...

See you in space!
ADMIN_3 of calgary TNG

Post Sun Nov 30, 2003 11:48 pm

im more of a critic
i cant write worth crap but i am a good revisor


wait a minute!?.....I am wolfy!!

<edit>and the freeport 5 incident
i thought it was freeport 7

.........Wolfy ..........
(Spamicus Muchius Stupidus)

Edited by - ):Wolf_Demon on 30-11-2003 23:50:10

Post Mon Dec 01, 2003 1:07 am

"Mr. President, the reporters are waiting." The words still sounded strange. Minutes before it had been Mr. vice president, but Jacobi's sudden death had every one un-easy. They had tolerated Trent for years now. Why he went rougue, nobody knew. All there was to know was that he attacked ships with no mercy, no warning, and apparently no goal. Named "the scourge of the stars" by Liberty, he had become a hero the less desireable factions of Liberty, spawning hundreds of copy-cats, and a lof of them were just as well armed and flew just as well as Trent did. But he had gone too far. He had killed the President. "Sir?" the young man inquired. "We armed him, you know," now President Davis replied. "Gave him a surplus ship and a few thousand credits. All this could have been avoided, so many lives saved." "Sir, no one could have anticipated this. He took out the entire Missouri! No one saw it coming. Besides, it was that blood traitor of an LSF officer who armed and eventually ran off with him." "Her name is Jun'ko," Davis interupted fiercly, "She was a 'friend' of mine, and I approved her to provide the ship. Does that make me a traitor?" said Davis with a tone of anger in his voice. "No sir," replied the assistant cooly, "I meant nothing by it. What shall I tell the press?" "Tell them, all Liberty personel are to hunt Mr. Trent at all costs. We end this now. We will get back our space." "Yes sir," replied the man as he left the room. "And I will get back my Juni," Davis whispered to himself. --- RR16

Post Mon Dec 01, 2003 1:13 am

that ice guy on the forum they have, sucks at spelling

Post Mon Dec 01, 2003 9:28 am

I dont think the first line was a bad spelling.

Post Mon Dec 01, 2003 3:25 pm

So far the story sucks and the basic idea goes against ALL roleplaying online netiquette. But thats just this Roleplaying vets 2 cents

-~-~-~-~
There is no Silicon Heaven! But where do all the calculators go ?

You could no more evade my wrath... than you could your own shadow!

Post Mon Dec 01, 2003 7:17 pm

Come and point excactly what wrong, or write something that isnt, as you say, "suck".

Post Mon Dec 01, 2003 10:55 pm

this story does not suck
he is the one that sucks

that was rather n00blike heltak
and you call yourself a squadron commander!

lol ff


wait a minute!?.....I am wolfy!!

.........Wolfy ..........
(Spamicus Muchius Stupidus)

Post Mon Dec 01, 2003 11:48 pm

Hello, vet rper here it sucks IMO since your trying to be serious in the wrong place. Follow ons = 3 word games etc etc

What you want is an RPG SET in the FL universe not a follow on from FL since well its bad repiquette

-~-~-~-~
There is no Silicon Heaven! But where do all the calculators go ?

You could no more evade my wrath... than you could your own shadow!

Post Mon Dec 01, 2003 11:53 pm

go write ur own story if it sucks!


wait a minute!?.....I am wolfy!!
i have the urge to bring a thread from 60 days ago to life

Post Tue Dec 02, 2003 12:00 am

Everybody just gets back on topic and ignore the trollish behavior!

Post Fri Dec 05, 2003 6:26 am

is work continuing on the story
cause i dont think ne1 is interested in this thread anymore I SHALL PREVAIL!!!
a new thread in the off topic froum should do


wait a minute!?.....I am wolfy!!
i have the urge to bring a thread from 60 days ago to life

Post Fri Dec 05, 2003 12:52 pm

We have chapter 8 - the Dusk and 9 - Battle Of Pittsburgh.
I made ch8, my first chapter and Ximian mastered over 9 in two sequels.

FL:Aftermath

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