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Mon Oct 13, 2003 6:23 am
That isn't the exact quote, and it was unintentional. And, unless you carried the empress in the backseat of your Drake without ever mentioning it, malystryx, then she should still be on Malaga....
Little plot nitpicks, nothing big really. Raises the credibility of the story if we have it consistent.
I have fall break this week, so unless I'm an absolute bum I'll be posting alot.
Little plot nitpicks, nothing big really. Raises the credibility of the story if we have it consistent.
I have fall break this week, so unless I'm an absolute bum I'll be posting alot.
Mon Oct 13, 2003 1:35 pm
what is the year it all happens? like exact number... I haven't even got clue about what years FL story takes place...
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Knight who wears White
www.thestuffnetworks.com
\ Greater God /
--Agree With ARCON Year--
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Knight who wears White
www.thestuffnetworks.com
\ Greater God /
--Agree With ARCON Year--
Mon Oct 13, 2003 3:31 pm
somewhere past 800 AS.
Read it? I just wanna get this straight, that's all.
Edited by - Nickless V2.0 Beta on 13-10-2003 16:33:01
@White: No, I don't think anyone would forget such a thing. especially when he's in the very middle of all that. Realy man,no offence but try to keep it logical.
Read it? I just wanna get this straight, that's all.
Edited by - Nickless V2.0 Beta on 13-10-2003 16:33:01
Tue Oct 14, 2003 5:10 am
<pre><font size=1 face=Courier>*Warning. Superhero Alert.* </font></pre>
Sorry... that's a bit egotistical of me...
Anyway, malys? It looks like you're superheroing (superheroining?) your character.
I know I'm being very nit-picky, but I think that you're stepping outside the boundaries of... uh... oh, I don't know the expression. At any rate, killing two squads of rheinlanders by yourself seems a bit too much to me.
Of course, it's just my opinion. I'm not sure at all what the rest of the group feels about this, and if I'm part of the minority, so be it.
(Oh, one more thing. I think Jim would object to his character losing control like that. I'm pretty sure that's not how Johnson acts. Of course, he's not my character, so I'll let Jim correct me.)
Edit: I should put in that I'm not trying to be mean. Taking out the empress was good, and overall you're doing a good job of helping the story flow along. These are just teeny nitpicks that I'm notorious for.
(And if I'm not notorious for them yet... watch out
)
Edited by - Whasp Commander on 14-10-2003 06:12:00
Edited by - Whasp Commander on 14-10-2003 06:43:27
Sorry... that's a bit egotistical of me...
Anyway, malys? It looks like you're superheroing (superheroining?) your character.
I know I'm being very nit-picky, but I think that you're stepping outside the boundaries of... uh... oh, I don't know the expression. At any rate, killing two squads of rheinlanders by yourself seems a bit too much to me.
Of course, it's just my opinion. I'm not sure at all what the rest of the group feels about this, and if I'm part of the minority, so be it.
(Oh, one more thing. I think Jim would object to his character losing control like that. I'm pretty sure that's not how Johnson acts. Of course, he's not my character, so I'll let Jim correct me.)
Edit: I should put in that I'm not trying to be mean. Taking out the empress was good, and overall you're doing a good job of helping the story flow along. These are just teeny nitpicks that I'm notorious for.
(And if I'm not notorious for them yet... watch out
)
Edited by - Whasp Commander on 14-10-2003 06:12:00
Edited by - Whasp Commander on 14-10-2003 06:43:27
Tue Oct 14, 2003 6:04 am
Yeah, whasp commander seems right about this. You ran from section 2, to section twelve, killed elite Rheinlanders with ease along the way, and dealt with an auto mobile cannon.
Seems just a little farfetched, doesn't it? Kind of like True Lies?
Even though your character isn't completely human, she has to have limitations. She has a physical presence, like everyone else, and is likely to get hit by a crack shot elite Rheinlander. Unless she has super special combat training which we don't know about.
And, my character doesn't frequently cuss. Even though he probably should, since he is a criminal. He's sort of me in this story, and he represents what I would do. And I only cuss in certain situations.
Constructive criticism, and no less.
So where are all our characters gonna meet up? Kyoto base? Since all the criminals are going there anyway? We should have one, because we can all gather together again, exchange stories, determine the next plot direction, and then go off on tangents all over again.
Edited by - Jim Groovester on 14-10-2003 07:08:06
Seems just a little farfetched, doesn't it? Kind of like True Lies?
Even though your character isn't completely human, she has to have limitations. She has a physical presence, like everyone else, and is likely to get hit by a crack shot elite Rheinlander. Unless she has super special combat training which we don't know about.
And, my character doesn't frequently cuss. Even though he probably should, since he is a criminal. He's sort of me in this story, and he represents what I would do. And I only cuss in certain situations.
Constructive criticism, and no less.
So where are all our characters gonna meet up? Kyoto base? Since all the criminals are going there anyway? We should have one, because we can all gather together again, exchange stories, determine the next plot direction, and then go off on tangents all over again.
Edited by - Jim Groovester on 14-10-2003 07:08:06
Tue Oct 14, 2003 10:48 pm
WhiteKnight, I must object to your last post. It makes hardly any sense and you bring me into your part in a way that it could never happen.
This way I somehow feel robbed of what I feel is mine, namely the escape from Manhattan. If I'm wrong about this, please tell me.
I am currently working on this (for me) very important part of the story and I'm trying to make this work out smoothly. A lot of things are going to happen and your post doesn't fit in it the way I have it right now.
I'm asking you to take away your last post and wait until I post my story.
I will certainly include you and make sure you have a significant role in the escape.
Further more, the repair part must, in my opinion, be done a little more sensitive. The way you discribe it now makes it look like you're glueing the metal sheets on and like anyone can do it, wich I'm sure is not the case.
From someone who has been a part of this project I expected something better, because you have done better.
Wether or not you take away your post is up to you entirely, this is just a request.
Another request is to give others time to write their posts. I'm very busy at the moment and don't have the time to put something up every day, just like most of us.
Don't be offended, that is in no way my intention. I'm doing this for best of the story.
This way I somehow feel robbed of what I feel is mine, namely the escape from Manhattan. If I'm wrong about this, please tell me.
I am currently working on this (for me) very important part of the story and I'm trying to make this work out smoothly. A lot of things are going to happen and your post doesn't fit in it the way I have it right now.
I'm asking you to take away your last post and wait until I post my story.
I will certainly include you and make sure you have a significant role in the escape.
Further more, the repair part must, in my opinion, be done a little more sensitive. The way you discribe it now makes it look like you're glueing the metal sheets on and like anyone can do it, wich I'm sure is not the case.
From someone who has been a part of this project I expected something better, because you have done better.
Wether or not you take away your post is up to you entirely, this is just a request.
Another request is to give others time to write their posts. I'm very busy at the moment and don't have the time to put something up every day, just like most of us.
Don't be offended, that is in no way my intention. I'm doing this for best of the story.
Wed Oct 15, 2003 3:55 am
Yeah, WHite knight. To bring a character already entrenched in a character important story is to rob someone of something that rightfully belongs to him.
It's sort of a matter of respect for other people's characters.
Remember, we're all authors of this story. We have to work together.
I'm tired of acting so preachy, dammit!
It's sort of a matter of respect for other people's characters.
Remember, we're all authors of this story. We have to work together.
I'm tired of acting so preachy, dammit!
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