i like this

okay it seems i've been stomping on you a bit lately, but its not personal.

There are a couple of tracks that stand on thier own. Those would be 'Hopeless Wings' and 'Lost in Loss'. The other seem to lack depth, and really seem one dimentional, clumsy and messy.

Slower tracks seem to be able to carry themselves without a beat behind them, and only really thick classical music an push forward with other instruments driving forward. is only my opinion though.

A small piece of advice: Dont go for the full album yet. work on an EP, a smaller release with about 4-5 songs on it, and put you best stuff you have on it, sort of like a demo, but for general release.

Speaking on the subject: If anyone is interested in hearing a WIP EP of mine, let me know and i might post it

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I'm Rick James, *****.

@Jask: Well, if you'll notice, those are the later tracks. I'm getting better, and Lost in Loss was composed yesterday, actually. However, using the voice from Lost in Loss (slightly modified) i have the ability to possibly start creating more "multi-dimensional" songs, i guess you would call it.

But yeah, i'm still learning, but i'm getting there