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Good photos ben. Mind if I offer some constructive criticism? If you don't want to hear it, move straight to the next post!
The photo of the boy. Great photo. You really captured something there. I only have two things to say about it...1, your framing is still a bit off, there's no need to have that woman in the background at all, and it kinda bugs me that you can't see his left shoulder. 2, It seems a little out of focus - was this originally b&w or have you desaturated it? I think if the photo was a little sharper there would be more depth to the blacks, which is the essence of b&w photography. The blacks should be reeeeaaallly black, not an extremely dark grey. But all in all its a great photo. Here's a crude photoshop retouch to demonstrate what I mean - I couldn't sharpen it as much as I wanted, but I've increased the black levels and crudely blurred out the background a little. I never condone photoshop retouching, a good photographer would get it right first time, but I never do (I'm not a good photographer!) so a little photoshopping sometimes is the way to go....
new version
The photo of the car. Great subject matter, great photo. It was a good choice to go with b&w on the car, but the blacks again seem a little washed out. It might have been better to zoom in on a feature of the car...the vintage cars are full of detail. Have a look at this photo that my colleague wendy took...she really caught something here that your mind takes in, but you'd never consider snapping with a camera normally. I think its quite cool...
car headlights
Really impressed though ben, you've really put some thought into your photos. Now its just a matter of practice.
Edited by - Stinger on 5/17/2004 7:38:56 PM
Edited by - gromit on 5/18/2004 9:06:40 AM
The photo of the boy. Great photo. You really captured something there. I only have two things to say about it...1, your framing is still a bit off, there's no need to have that woman in the background at all, and it kinda bugs me that you can't see his left shoulder. 2, It seems a little out of focus - was this originally b&w or have you desaturated it? I think if the photo was a little sharper there would be more depth to the blacks, which is the essence of b&w photography. The blacks should be reeeeaaallly black, not an extremely dark grey. But all in all its a great photo. Here's a crude photoshop retouch to demonstrate what I mean - I couldn't sharpen it as much as I wanted, but I've increased the black levels and crudely blurred out the background a little. I never condone photoshop retouching, a good photographer would get it right first time, but I never do (I'm not a good photographer!) so a little photoshopping sometimes is the way to go....
new version
The photo of the car. Great subject matter, great photo. It was a good choice to go with b&w on the car, but the blacks again seem a little washed out. It might have been better to zoom in on a feature of the car...the vintage cars are full of detail. Have a look at this photo that my colleague wendy took...she really caught something here that your mind takes in, but you'd never consider snapping with a camera normally. I think its quite cool...
car headlights
Really impressed though ben, you've really put some thought into your photos. Now its just a matter of practice.
Edited by - Stinger on 5/17/2004 7:38:56 PM
Edited by - gromit on 5/18/2004 9:06:40 AM
Sculpture
Whistle Stop
Stripy Bike
A bike
Yellow Ducati
Furry van
Ha Ha Bar
Chicken that goes
Library
Fountain
Silent Table sculpture
Toby the Westie 1
Toby the Westie 2
Toby the Westie 3
Edited by - freighter fighter on 5/17/2004 10:43:35 AM
Whistle Stop
Stripy Bike
A bike
Yellow Ducati
Furry van
Ha Ha Bar
Chicken that goes
Library
Fountain
Silent Table sculpture
Toby the Westie 1
Toby the Westie 2
Toby the Westie 3
Edited by - freighter fighter on 5/17/2004 10:43:35 AM
been having a day out in the sunshine, snapping in Canterbury have we? go and get me some sweet tobacco and coconut mushrooms from The Sugar Boy by Northgate, I'll brass you up later. My regular supplier has let me down of late, despite the numerous favours I provide him with...
every day is like Sunday, every day is silent and grey..
Edited by - Tawakalna on 5/17/2004 11:13:29 AM
every day is like Sunday, every day is silent and grey..
Edited by - Tawakalna on 5/17/2004 11:13:29 AM
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