what the hellare you loosers talking about?
Read that story and then slap yourself in the face and read it again
Some disembodied narator tells you what a little girl does in her room on her OWN...how the **** would he know this? We're told at the end that she smiles to herself, knowing the secret of what really happened. so either the author is the girl or this is, as i said, a load of crap.
NEXT...
take out all the cutesy shmootsy "pee wee girl coughing to get attention" and her only having 1 dollar something or that she has no understanding of the meaning of the word miracle or the way real world medicine works.
NEXT...
what sadist country asks you for money for life saving operations and what even more sadist parents cant get out a loan/second mortgage/whore the wife to get a life saving operation. Hell, sounds like they didnt really think about how much they really wanted their kid to live.
This story is so full of crap im suprised it doesnt have a final paragraph saying "if you dont send this story to 10 of your friends your penis will drop off, if you do send it to 10 people, the wish you make tonight will come true"
jesus, grow some common sense and join the sane.
"I've seen things you people wouldnt believe.
Attacked ships on fire off the shoulder of orion. Ive seen C-Beams glitter in the darkness at tannhauser gate.
All those moments, will be lost in time, like tears in the rain.
Time, to die."