a poem: i wondered.......i thought.......now i got a result
if there is any mistake in comprehension or grammar, plz point out, if u got better idear, plz say it, if u like it, plz keep loving it.....i want improvement on my very first peom........advice welcomed,the character :arcon: is simulated by me, it does not refer to any one here....if it does....i got no idear......
episode 1. once......i wondered:
some guy like arcon r really nutty.......
why they always pretending to be a teacher?
always wanna teach someone else?
he said my post was ***a s s, but i think he's the biggest a s s here.and i would like to kick it.......haha.....
why u pretending to be cool here? acron, but u r not cool at all.....
ur post is like flavorless s h i t........and u sucked that up........
other guy also posted me, it was ok......
don't pretend to be so "s h i t t y"......acron....
episode 2: once......... i thought:
as i known, people who don't really speak english, they actully love talking about others' english level....etc.
if ur post is really funny and do make sense, i will accept it......
when i typing, i like changing rows, and make my post like a poem...somehow it doesn't work.....so wat? u speak..no, u just type words better than me, that's all...although sometimes i leave out comprehensions....
that was boring b u l l s h i t acron said.......
have a look at others' posts......:
[Cpbuja
Sqdr. Commander
posted 08-06-2003 00:27 CET
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Subject: jessy (aka lord of universe)
Status: BLACKLISTED
React: Aggressively
Reason: Extreme mind deviation
Apply: Immediately
jessy, it is my honest opinion that you need to leave Lancers Reactor forums until you improve your social skills, your ethics, your morale, and your manners.
You do not understand that the entities that post here are actual persons, and thus you are finding yourself treating them as NPCs in some stupid game -- completely without any comprehension of the implications that your posts might have, and without guilt or compassion. You are ready when you understand what I said in full. Also, I think that you should see a doctor. A good doctor...
I cannot make you leave, but I can appeal to you to ask yourself what are you doing here, and why.
Careful what you wish... You might just get it.
i reckon that is funny and make sense, so i accept it positively, no s h i t, no problem.......quit clean
episode 3: now i got a result:
.........arcon is a handicap guy.........mentally.........
i don't wanna a handicap guy reply me who can't even read my topic.......becos of the flunking IQ........
acron is a more "special" i thought........
anyway i don't want any **** in my thread........
if u really think u r a cool and funny ass, arcon, u really should blow some meaningful fart........
the more u pretend to be cool, the more u become an.........
a.......
a.......
s.......
h.......
o.......
l........
e.......
jessy thinks juni loves trent, but dare not to say........
Edited by - lord of universe on 09-06-2003 10:44:44
Edited by - lord of universe on 09-06-2003 10:47:17
Edited by - lord of universe on 09-06-2003 11:14:18
episode 1. once......i wondered:
some guy like arcon r really nutty.......
why they always pretending to be a teacher?
always wanna teach someone else?
he said my post was ***a s s, but i think he's the biggest a s s here.and i would like to kick it.......haha.....
why u pretending to be cool here? acron, but u r not cool at all.....
ur post is like flavorless s h i t........and u sucked that up........
other guy also posted me, it was ok......
don't pretend to be so "s h i t t y"......acron....
episode 2: once......... i thought:
as i known, people who don't really speak english, they actully love talking about others' english level....etc.
if ur post is really funny and do make sense, i will accept it......
when i typing, i like changing rows, and make my post like a poem...somehow it doesn't work.....so wat? u speak..no, u just type words better than me, that's all...although sometimes i leave out comprehensions....
that was boring b u l l s h i t acron said.......
have a look at others' posts......:
[Cpbuja
Sqdr. Commander
posted 08-06-2003 00:27 CET
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Subject: jessy (aka lord of universe)
Status: BLACKLISTED
React: Aggressively
Reason: Extreme mind deviation
Apply: Immediately
jessy, it is my honest opinion that you need to leave Lancers Reactor forums until you improve your social skills, your ethics, your morale, and your manners.
You do not understand that the entities that post here are actual persons, and thus you are finding yourself treating them as NPCs in some stupid game -- completely without any comprehension of the implications that your posts might have, and without guilt or compassion. You are ready when you understand what I said in full. Also, I think that you should see a doctor. A good doctor...
I cannot make you leave, but I can appeal to you to ask yourself what are you doing here, and why.
Careful what you wish... You might just get it.
i reckon that is funny and make sense, so i accept it positively, no s h i t, no problem.......quit clean
episode 3: now i got a result:
.........arcon is a handicap guy.........mentally.........
i don't wanna a handicap guy reply me who can't even read my topic.......becos of the flunking IQ........
acron is a more "special" i thought........
anyway i don't want any **** in my thread........
if u really think u r a cool and funny ass, arcon, u really should blow some meaningful fart........
the more u pretend to be cool, the more u become an.........
a.......
a.......
s.......
h.......
o.......
l........
e.......
jessy thinks juni loves trent, but dare not to say........
Edited by - lord of universe on 09-06-2003 10:44:44
Edited by - lord of universe on 09-06-2003 10:47:17
Edited by - lord of universe on 09-06-2003 11:14:18