Is this a prolouge? cuz it looks intresting of sorts. Using new systems too, it has potential for a wonderful story. keep it up.






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When all else fails, tell them you want world peace, or teaching children to read and exploring your inner beauty.

I was not planning on a prologue but that is the prologue.
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Chapter 1
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Erik landed on manhattans rocky cockpit, staring into the concrete metroplis.
Thud. He landed, after a harrowing day trading to the boston system.
A drink. He loved liberty ale. Of he walked.

"So,what will it be today?" said the barteneder.
"Liberty Ale" Erik obviously replied.
"Oh havn't you heard? It was stolen."
"What!"
"Oh yes, outcasts took the lot."
" Can i get it back?"
"Yes,if you know where to go. Be warned. They are critters.

Erik needed a rest...
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Chapter 2 Coming Soon

Sticks and Stones will break my bones.
Thats Far Too Dangerous!
Lets use a...HUH! Nomad Energy Blaster?!
Blimey i would of liked my chainsaw

pretty good, refreshing to have a character in a freelancer fan fic that actually likes Liberty Ale lol.





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When all else fails, tell them you want world peace, or teaching children to read and exploring your inner beauty.

Chapter 2
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"Civillan 13-6 you are cleared for launch."
He pressed the touch-pad, selected the tradelane to californa jump gate and of he zoomed.

He arrived at the jump gate, feeling ready for these evil pirates.
As he clicked the dock button the control panel, a message came up.
"Jumpgate not functionial."

What!
The jumpgate had been severly damaged by the order, as they had used alien torpedos and wrecked it.
Hmmm...

Bingo!
He would ask his former pirate friend Oleg Nacason about the where abouts of the californa jump hole.
Oleg lived at Ames Research Station, as he took a job as a researcher.
Erik turned round, towards the colorado jumpgate.

But there stood, a fleet of outcasts, 8 infact, swarming towards erik.
He could'nt believe his eyes as the outcast crusier shot forth its cannon.

He was doomed.
He was worried.
But he wasn't dead.

Chapter 3
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Erik was fighting the blackness...and woke to be at battleship rio grande medical centre. The doctor told Erik that the rest of the liberty systems were under siege from a large outcast force. His personal Tv bleeped. As he turned it on, he saw outcasts destroying pueblo station, planet denver was been attacked, and a docking ring was been created on Durango. He rose up, and ran towards the ship bay. His ship had fourntaly survived. He launched and selected the trade lane to the kepler system. Whizz...zzihW. And he could belive his eyes.
3 Outcast Fighters were guarding a shadow cruiser, a alien race to sirius. Quickly he cruised to the trade lane before outcasts had a chance to move.
Ames Research Station. He touched dock on the touchpad.

Oleg? He walked towards his bunker home. EMPTY! He asked the rent reception about Oleg and they claimed he went Tau-29 on Shinkaku Station. Great! Now would he do?

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