On behalf of all fanfic readers here...

GET OFF YOUR ASS AND UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!

Whew. I feel much better now.

---"Smoke me a kipper, I'll be back for breakfast."

I'm WORKIN ON IT!

I know it's been a while, but I've been very busy and exhausted lately. These things take time as I'm sure you'll know neuro.

Come on Killa! I've already got 7 chapters posted and 10 written! And I started only 3 weeks ago! Lets move people!

Okay, due to the censor here, I've taken the liberty of creating a website where I can post the chapters uncensored.

Linky!

Chapter 1 is up.

I've been having a lot of computer problems lately but I finally got time to finish chapter one.

Note: this site is by NO means complete.

dont think congressman and senators exist in bretonia.

why does the rheinlanders in chapter 1 have a russian and a fake japanese name?

Hey Killa, could have asked me. I run a website, you know.

You. Killa. Update. Now.

Neuro. Posted yesterday. Totally oblivious.

Like I'm going to one up a day.

All your oil are belong to U.S.

What is the difference between Michael Jackson and a grocery bag? One's white, plastic and dangerous for kids to play with, the other you put your groceries in.

Sorry. My. Bad.

Well, that wasn't any good. I accidently just clicked Clear Fields instead of Reply to Topic. Sorry. Because I'm too lazy to retype that again, I'll just shorten it.

I'm not going to beat around the bush here, I'm seriously considering starting The Holocaust over, giving it a different beginning, giving Frank Johnson a little work (because let's face it, he's an ass). For the most part, the story will remain unchanged, it'll just start differently and Frank Johnson will be a little different.

Now, you guys have an oppertunity to tell me what you think about this. I want to get it right, and in my opinion, that is not what I've done so far. I am going to try to make this my best one yet, and I want it to flow smoothly, sound good, and have a good plot. I will probably start over anyway, but I want some opinions. I'll be able to make it better knowing I have some support.

Tell me what you think.

Tone down the language and post it here, other than that, Go for it m8.

I don't wanna tone down the language, that's why I posted the first two parts on another website.

Now, I need to go back to the Runescape website and try to get my account back from being banned off the forums, for some reason, all the moderators started acting like Nazis.

Well, don't everybody post at once.