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The fall of mankind

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Post Thu Dec 30, 2004 3:14 pm

The fall of mankind

Chapter 1 - History

I sat staring out of my room window… I couldn’t believe it that in just 25 years we had come so far, I remember watching the video my father made when I was only 2 years old it showed the first shuttles launch from earth trying to colonize Mars in an attempt to solve earths ongoing population struggle. It was then it happened. The most powerful nations on earth joined together in to colonize Mars, it was supposed to be the greatest achievement of mankind but it all went so horribly wrong.
The first few weeks were slow, the nations which were sent to Mars; USA , UK and Japan all landed on separate parts of Mars setting up towns, Initially there mission was to create a safe atmosphere so it was safe to live there without the constant supply oxygen from earth , it was nicknamed Project Green. Within 10 years Mars had a stable atmosphere and large shuttles were constructed to take people to live there. Just 5 years later people were buying spacecraft from car shops , and taking the 4 month trip to Mars in search of a new life.
By the year 2170 large cities sprawled across Marss surface, later the same year without anyone knowing President Lume of the newly founded “Mars Nation” began Building an army on Mars.
In 2174, exactly one year ago Lume began restricting access to Mars and began to shoot civilians on site, word of this finally reached the UN on earth and as Lumes motives to Openly attack earth went public, an army known as the “Earth Defence force” (E.D.F) was formed to protect earth at all costs. There were many battles that year and because of the massive army Lume had control of the UN decided to build four massive battleships often called “Space Cities” They where called the New York, Paris, Sydney and the Glasgow.


“Beep, Beep” “Beep, Beep” With a load thud Rial slammed his hand on his alarm. After he got dressed he decided to turn on his holo-imager “Why is there never anything good on in the mornings but the news!” He thought to himself. He couldn’t stand to watch the news these days just more grim stories about the war he was tired with all the fighting he just wished it could end…

Rial made his way to the rec room, he sat at a table himself ordered a coffee, just across the room he saw Admiral Wer ,Wer caught his gaze and Gestured him over to another table.
“Ah I’ve been looking for you sergeant, I figured you’d be here.”
“sir?”
“Ok I’ll cut to the chase, you know that the E.D.F Glasgow was just finished 2 months ago”
“Yes?”
“Well I’ve been asked to command it and I’ve been looking for some good pilots and soldiers for the new elite combat unit that will serve on the Glasgow, I’ve been looking at your service records and I think that you’re the type of guy I need on this”
“well sir…I’d be honored”
“Good ,I’ll see to it that you get transferred to Manhattan station”

After the Admiral left the rec room a tall man wearing a black cloak approached Rial.
“Hello” said Rial anxiously
The stranger nodded his head ”Sergeant“.
“who are you, What’s all this about “ said Rial nervously, Noticing 2 armed men appear at the door
“Who I am is not important. But I have a message for you” The stranger handed Rial a small piece of paper “Don’t tell anyone this meeting took place”
“Of course”
Rial slipped out of the rec room only to be confronted by the two armed men he’d seen earlier. “A man spoke to you in there” said the Biggest of the two “We know who he is but what did he give you?”
“What are you talking about”
“Stop playin’ around and answer the question”
Rial looked around the corridor, it was empty as usual. “Think Rial, Think” He thought to himself. He slipped his hand into his pocket and pulled his pen out and stabbed the guy in the eye. Immediately he dropped Rial and started Flailing around like a wounded animal. Rial took this opportunity to dash down the corridor he quickly opened a door locking it behind him, he knew it wouldn’t hold for long but it would buy him some time. He sprinted down corridor after corridor until he came to Cergels Room door, he burst in locking it behind him.

“What are you doing here Rial?” Cergel asked curiously
“Two men grabbed me outside the rec room but I managed to escape”
“Buy why were they chasing you?”
“I think it has something to do with this”
Rial looked at the note one small sentence was written on it “Meet me at room 204 at 22:00 Today”


Edited by - Shadow_killer on 1/6/2005 10:13:29 AM

Post Thu Dec 30, 2004 4:55 pm

I like it! Nicely written and thought out.

Post Fri Dec 31, 2004 5:22 pm

Chapter 2 - Manhattan station

“So you goin?” Cergel asked
“I don’t know, I mean I could of got killed because this one little piece of paper said were and when the “meeting” took place”
“Yeah I never thought of it that way. What happened to that guy you said gave you the note?”
“I dunno, I he slipped away while I wasn’t looking”
“Did he say who the note was from?”
“No all he said was who he is wasn’t important, I guess he was just a messenger”
“Didn’t you say he called you sergeant”
“That’s my rank why would he call me anything else”
“No I mean how could he know”
“Yeah, that means the guy he works for could be on the inside!”
“You mean in the E.D.F?”
“Yeah could be”
“This cant be good”

Rial finally decided to go to room 204 to met this guy, he arrived there five minutes early. There was a guard standing outside the door “You got the note?” He said.
“Yeah, here it is”. Rial handed the guard the note a couple of seconds passed then the guard let him in. He walked into a poorly lit room with a large metal table in the middle.
“Have a seat” Said a strange voice from the other side of the table.
Rial sat waiting impatiently while the stranger whispered something to someone next to him.
“My sources tell me your going on the E.D.F Glasgow?”
“Yes”
“I feel it is my duty to advise you to not go on it”
“why?”
“I’m sorry that’s all I can say…its…classified”
“who are you!, who do you work for!”
“I’m sorry I cant tell you that”
“Your working for the government aren’t you!”
“Guards!, escort this man out of here!”
A few guards escorted Rial out of the room and down the corridor. After they left Rial made his way back to his room.

The next day he decided he as going to go on the E.D.F Glasgow, this was a great chance for him to get away from this station and besides the pay was good. He gathered his few belongings in his pack and headed to the departure area he said goodbye to his friends and waited in the departure lounge. An hour passed by when his shuttle began boarding. When he was on the shuttle he was sure he’d seen the guy he met the other night, he began to grow nervous”20 minutes, that all 20 minutes” he kept thinking to himself. He managed to get a seat close to the front so that after they had docked he could slip out of the shuttle quickly.

He managed to get out and through security when he was confronted by the stanger from the previous night.
“What are you doing here!” He shouted angrily “I told you to stay away from here”
“hey this my life go follow someone else you creep!”
“You don’t understand”
“What?”
“didn’t you wonder why you were selected for this mission”
“I was told it was because of my piloting skills”
“in a way”
“what’s that supposed to mean”
“the UN is becoming corrupt, most of the leaders there are plotting against their own people so their own life’s would be spared”
“why are you telling me this”
“There after me, they found out I know and are trying to kill me I lost my job and they killed my family”
“oh my god”
“We have to do something”
“not yet wait till were far away from here I cant risk telling you anymore here they will be looking for me here”

Edited by - Shadow_killer on 1/6/2005 10:11:43 AM

Post Fri Dec 31, 2004 10:51 pm

Very nice!

Post Mon Jan 03, 2005 8:53 am

Sorry i havent finished chapter 2 ive been busy today


Edited by - Shadow_killer on 1/4/2005 3:16:47 PM

Post Tue Jan 04, 2005 6:03 pm

i like it, but one thing bugs me. the sergent (sorry cant remember his name) must be in a civilian building, and it just seems a bit irrational for him to stab the guard guy in the eye, especially if theres another armed guard next to him.... sorry maybe its just me, but that just came as a bit of a surprise...

Post Wed Jan 05, 2005 4:04 am

The sergents name is Rial.
The whole stabing the eye thing was just to distract the guards.
He is on a military/Civilian station, but i dont mention it beccause it dosent come up later in the story.

I hope that answerd your question :-)

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Post Wed Jan 05, 2005 12:57 pm

i guess i was just thinking that the other guard would start to shoot at Bail if he stabbed the guard's partner in the eye, maybe im just being too picky =P

Post Thu Jan 06, 2005 10:12 am

ok theres chapter 2 done

Post Fri Mar 11, 2005 7:45 am

Hope there is coming more SOON!

Or there will be trouble!!!

Post Mon Mar 28, 2005 4:46 pm

A sergeant in the Navy?

Post Tue May 24, 2005 1:49 pm

Sorry guys i didnt finish this fan fic but ive been really busy the last couple of months and i havent been on the site in ages.i'll try to get back on track and continue this

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