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Fan Fiction by Neuromancer---Freelancer: Armageddon Version

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Post Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:06 am

I hope no one is really sad that Trent is dead. I never really liked him anyway. I think Micro$oft really screwed up when making their main character. I can't stand the way he talks, and the way he jiggles his butt, gah! Very good Neuro, as I say for the second time.

The story was rounded off excellently, however, as much as I hate to say it, I couldn't help but feel that the end was a little anti-climactic.

Post Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:38 am

Great job! Excellent ending.

Post Sat Jul 30, 2005 3:22 pm

And now...the closing credits!

A big thanks to all who have taken the time to read this and leave feedback. I really appreciate the comments.

There are a few people I feel the need to mention by name.

First of all, a big thanks to Bret Bretonian, wherever he's gone, for giving me the impetus to continue this story after a long absence.

Another big thanks to Codename for the constructive criticism. Your comments really did make the story read better.

And finally, another big thanks to KIlla for his never-ending smartass comments. What's life without a little sarcasm? You now have no excuse to not finish your fanfic. Dom't make me come over there and whoop your ass...

Finally, if I may indulge in a little self-promotion...Don't forget to check out my latest fanfic, Genocide.

Again, thanks to all at TLR who took the time to read this!



---There is no more deeply moving religious experience than cheating on a cheater.

Post Sat Jul 30, 2005 3:59 pm

Neuro, loved the story, love your work!

You have done an excellent job on this story, and I hope you keep on writing!

Very, very great job!

Post Sat Jul 30, 2005 4:38 pm

Yup, what would my life be without my smartass comments?

Post Sat Jul 30, 2005 5:42 pm

great story nero, I'll be expecting a new prologue on here any day now =P

oh and jacob, ever going to contine Victory at all Cost? I was really enjoying that...

Post Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:56 pm

I am going to. I've been having computer problems lately, but I do plan on getting a new chapter up this week.

Post Sun Jul 31, 2005 8:00 am

I can't think of a smartass comment to post right now.

Post Sun Jul 31, 2005 8:18 pm

yay =D I'll try and work on another chapter for mine too....

Post Wed Aug 03, 2005 2:54 pm

Great story. Really enjoyed it. I was expectin Juni to get killed, though. Not Trent. Awe Inspireing. (However you spell that)

Ph34r d4 C/-//_/p4c4br4

Post Thu Aug 04, 2005 1:02 am

Hi Neuro!!!

Great Story, but the end should have been a little bit longer but its ok.

But i have 1 little question.
Will there be a reworked PDF version of your story somewhere to download??? That would be cool.

Hope your new Fanfic Genocide will be as good as this one.

Post Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:03 pm

great story, sad ending, action packed battles. what more could we ask 4???

Post Fri Aug 19, 2005 3:01 pm

I have a new home in the shadows Neuro

Thank you, but I must honestly say i really didn't think i did much.

Another job well done here again, but i must confess, i haven't started reading genocide yet. Lets hope FL2 does come out and you find more writing inspiration from that which will keep you around here a bit longer writing fantastic

*takes hat off to Neuro*

Edited by - Bret Bretonian on 8/19/2005 4:14:01 PM

Edited by - Bret Bretonian on 8/19/2005 4:14:32 PM

Post Tue Dec 13, 2005 12:41 pm

It has been years since I've read any stories. But you have managed to do what others could not do. Capture my imagination.
I love a good story and you have done well.

Post Tue Dec 13, 2005 8:17 pm

Ah, just a gravedig. That's disappointing. I thought this was the conclusion of genocide for a second.

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