I had left Rhienland when I was 14, times were hard. Food was scarce and crime ran rampant across the planets and bases. My father had been killed in a riot and he never knew his mom. I learned to fly being a miner in the asteroid belts. I became friends with the pirates and helped them know were and to attack. I was caught but his friends helped Me escape and told him to lave for Bretonia or liberty. I left for planet Denver, were I started a life of pick pocketing.

I know this very short but I have to go, so there will be more soon

oh great.. i had more but my computer deleted all i had done and i will be damned if i write 8 pages again.. and i cant delete this for some wiede reason

Wow, your comp must be REALLY screwed up!
Sounds like a good story though.

yeah real bummer, just got back from the shop so they missed a bug or 2

dsq, it looks like a good start, but your spelling needs work

Well, you must give him one thing, it has improved a LOT since some of his other stories! Good job of slowing down while you write DS, it sure makes the stories easier to read.

thanks but sadly this story wont take off the ground cus it was deleted, but in my lab more potions are devolping, and of course the one in my studios will involve Rhienland, the first little bit is done, ff i did a spell check nothing popped up