Chapter 1

Ferick strolled down the halls of a Rhienland battleship. He couldn’t sleep, and walking was the only thing to do. He decided to go to the hangar and look at the Rhienland Valkrye’s. They were big and graceful ships. They had power and were tough, not like pretty little Kusari ships. Suddenly the ship was rocked and red lights started flashing.

“All hands to your posts all hands to your posts incoming kusari boarding party in Hangar 2, closing hangar 2 doors.” A voice said over the in ship COM.

Ferick ran to the doors but was two late they were closed. Ferick hid behind a bunch of crates and watched as the Kusari ship came in. a bunch of Commando’s got out and looked around. Ferick hid there listening to his heart beat and heard the footsteps get closer and closer. The lead Commando raised his hand and the others stopped behind him. He placed a bomb to the hangar door. They all put up position around the door. Itblew open with metal flying every were and through the smoke laser came out on thee Kusarians and they returned fire. Ferick knew this was his only chance to help.

He jumped of the crate and shot the lead commando in the head. He grabbed bombs from the Commando and placed them on the Kusari ship. He jumped and took cover as it exploded.

“all pilots to ships” the COM man said

Ferick jumped into his ship and got ready…

End chapter 1

This guy writes cool. I need to learn how to write like that.

its easy i guess if you want you can email me with questions and i would be happy to answer

Chapter 2

"Lt.Ferick, you are cleared for launch."

"Roger, lets get out there and kick some Kusari ass!" Ferick said "Okay everyone check in"

"Captain Hans checking in" Wells said

"Lt.Derry Checking in" Derry said

"that does it for my Squad" Hans said "nice work Ferick, lets go!"

Ferick balsted out of the hangar and into a runnning fire fight. Rhienland and Kusari ships Weaved in and out firing in what looked like a dance.

"I can't shake this gu-" Derry said then his signal was cut off

"You Kusari sons of a..." Ferick yelled "its payback!"

Ferick locked onto the rear of a Kusari ship. He gave the trigger a gentle squeeze and sent another Kusari pilot to hell. Ferick did a barrel role and swerved by the wormhole the Kusari ships we coming through.

"What the hell are you doing Lt." Hans said

"Drop and roll Captain!" Ferick said "soon as these bastards come out of the hole my mines will get em!"

"They better" Hans said "becuase a battleship is coming through"

"Holy ****!" Ferick said "i've never seen anything like it!"

"all ships, this is battleship Hienburg, all avaible fighters board the ship and proceed to the engine room"

"shall we?" Ferick said

"After you!" Hans said "lets go"

"launching torpedo" Ferick said "got a hull breach putting up Enviro shield, that will get us a boarding platform."

"good job Lt." Hans said "im docking"

"i'll right of your starboard wing" Ferick said "lets kill some Kuysari!"

Chapter 4

Ferick and Hans flew at the battleship lasers blaring.

"okay Lt. nice and easy now we have five minutes to get out of this hole before the enviro shield fails." Hans said

"Aw, you know this ain't my regualar bird, this thing flys like a brick" Ferick said

"Careful now." Hans said "we want to sneak up on these Kusari"

Terrick and Hans landed in a hold that normaly would of sucked them into space. but they put up a Eviro Shield so it keeps the area filled with air and temperate.
Ferick pulled out a Rifle and jumped out of his ship. Hans was typing at a computer terminal and was trying to open the door. Ferick walked up to him.

"some old dud said the simplest explation is the best." Ferick said

"proceed Lt." Hans said

"watch and learn Captain" Ferick said as he wired several bombs to the door. "step back"

The door blew open in a massive explosion. Ferick and Hans walked through.

"i hear footsteps" Hans said 'Take cover"

Ferick and Hans hid behind a corner as a Gaurd was running up. Ferick pulled out his combat knife. the man was about to pass the corner when Ferick jumped out and stabbed him in the heart.

"well what do ya know" Ferick said "these guys bleed red too."

Ferick and Hans ran over to a small vent pipe, just large enough for someon to fight through. Feick climbed in and Hans followed. Ferick saw a exit from the tube right by the engine rooms.

"jackpot!' he said "i'll go first"

"i'll be right behind you" Hans said

Ferick jumped down, he lookd beside him and saw a Kusari Gaurdsman pointing a gun to him

"aww ****!"

Nice man. I really like the on-base aspect of it! One thing: go back through and fix some of the typos. That'll make it better.

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Some questions I have...
If you throw a cat out a car window does it become kitty liter?
If it's tourist season, why can't we shoot them?
Why did kamikaze pilots wear helmets?
Why do people who know the least know it the loudest?

yeah i know i know.... damn typos....

Chapter 5

Hans looked at the soilder holding the gun to Fericks head. he thought fast, knowing that he needed to kill the soilder quick and fast. He pulled out his rifle took aim and squeezed the trigger. Then hans jumped down and walked over to Ferick.

"whew thanks captain" Ferick said "that son of a... was going to kill me"

"no prob Lt." Hans said "now lets get these bombs up"

Ferick started putting bombs on key places in the room. when they blew up they would tke the battleship with them.

"okay Captain bombs are placed and two minutes before enviro sheild fails." Ferick said "the bombs are set for 2 minutes"

"lets go Lt." Hans said

They crawled back down the tubes and were running to there ships.

"10 seconds till bombs go off"

"Cmon captain faster" Frick said

"9"

"im going as fast as possible." Hans said

"8"

'Get it my ship its easier" Ferick said

"7"

"im in" Ferick said

"6"

"right behind you Lt." Hans said "take off

"5"

"powering up engines" Ferick said

"4"

"weapons systems online" Ferick said

"3"

"thrusters working" Ferick said

"2"

"blast off" Ferick said

"1"

Fericks ship flew out of the hole just as the battleship exploded in the eyes of the reatreating Kusari's. For that day Ferick had won.

Chapeter 6

Ferick and Hans were flying away in there ships making fun of weak kusari ships. they were both very drunk and so they fell asleep at the controls and drifted into aseteriod belt. even the banging of asteriods didn't wake them up they were so drunk. but then a jolt of horrbile pain woke them up.

"Welcome to the Kusari prison ship" a man said "i am Tagki, the commander of the sector"

Hans and FErick were still very drunk.

"You know, Kuasri sucks!" Hans said

"ooh ooh and did you hear the one about the guy who did the thing and then they went to Kusari and died." Ferick said

"no but i-" Hans said cut off bye Tagki

"shut up' Tagki said "you Rhienland swine"

"Swine! hey the reminds me of a story were." Hans said

"shut up Hans hes going to hit us" Ferick said

"you two jokers will wish you were dead!" Tagki said, But Ferick andd hans were fast asleep.

Ferick woke up with a spliting head ache. he turned to Hans, with a puzzled look on his face.

"did we just-"

"i think we did"

'were dead Hans Tagki is going to kill us."

Contined later becuase i am tired, but this is not the end of the chapter...