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Post Thu Sep 09, 2004 11:16 pm

Starwolf

The great story of Starwolf. Feel free to add stuff on.



Elite Rheinland Pilot, Robert Delfino was moving commodities in his awesome Rheinland Valkrie custom full of Class 9 and 10 guns. Suddenly, a huge Rheinland Battleship uncloaked in front of him. "What the?" exclaimed Robert. "See that transport, It's full of Diamonds. If you don't destroy it we will destroy you" the voice of the ship said. "No way!" exclaimed Robert, "That is ****ing unreasonable." "do it" replied the battleship "or die". Suddenly, another huge battleship uncloaked. "What the ****!" exclaimed Robert "that's a Liberty ship". "Battleship Osiris, exit the area immediately or you will be destoyed in: 5...4...3...2...1...All ships, open fire."ordered the Rheinland battleship "Quick, board the Osiris" yelled the Liberty battleship. Robert Docked with it.........to be continued.
Robert Docked with the Osiris, and jumped out of his ship. Two big looking security guards approached him. "Orillion wants to see you.", the first one said. "Orillian?" Robert asked. "But I thought Sam Lonigan...", "No"interrupted the second guard "we have a new leader". "Who?" asked Robert. "Step through here, please" ordered the first guard as he pointed to a slightly damaged airlock. Robert walked through, and saw five people talking. A bald man walked up to him. "I am Casper Orillion" said Orillion. "Pleased to meet you" said Robert, "And who are these people?" asked Robert. A women who looked about 30 stepped up to him. "Hi, I'm Juni, and this is Trent", she said as she pointed to a man in a brown Jacket. Another bald man and a women stepped up to him. "I'm Dr. Quintane, and this is Dr. Sinclair." Said the next bald man."Pleased to meet you too" said Robert. "Now why am I on this ship, and why did that battleship appear in my face?" Asked Robert Frustratedly. "The reason:" replied Orillion, "you are the last Rheinlander who has not been taken over by the nomads, that's why." "We have a Job for you are you interested?" asked Quintane. "Hang on, before I start taking Jobs from you, tell me what's going on and who the Nomads are."said Robert curiously "We don't exactly know" answered Quintane."we only know that they are parasites, and take over people. They've been doing it for some time now. Well, about the Job, if we succeed we will gain vital information about the Nomads. We need the Nomad power cell".......to be continued....


Edited by - Xsonic901 on 9/13/2004 11:38:49 PM

Post Fri Sep 10, 2004 2:59 am

"What the?" exclaimed drakken

Edited by - drakken on 9/10/2004 4:14:39 AM

Post Fri Sep 10, 2004 3:27 pm

i have heard and wrote short chapters but this takes the cake

Post Sat Sep 11, 2004 9:10 pm

Suggestion: Use paragraphs and put dialog on a new line if there's a new speaker. Since the "chapters" are short it's not too difficult to read as is but it'll be easeir if you space it out more. It'll also look longer and more impressive that way.

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