Chapter 11 title : goodbye

"this is captain Lixin watts here with Mark i am requesting that he dock with Starfinder" Lixin said
"this is Lt. Derik you are cleared to dock." Derik said
"when i dock i want every one on the bridge its big." Lixin said
"yes sir" Derik said

The two fighters docked with the starfinder.

Lixin walked on to the bridge.
"Crew, Friends, outcast. today i come bringing painful and very bad news. what i am going to aske you will not be easy and i only hope you can agree for i am afraid you dont have a choice. i am going to ask you all to die."
"what the hell do you mean Lixin" Derik asked
"i know this is hard but our hunter firnds have put in a tracing device on the engine. the only way to remvoe it is destroy the engine. and even if we did have another this is the only engine that can bring us home. and if we go home the hunters follow. now this hurts me as much as it hurts you all. i have a wife and a baby boy. but if i want them to live i must die. we have fought hard been together and now we fialy are givin something back to the world. i only hope you wont have any hard feelings at me for making you do this."

"i understand" Mark said "to the death"
"i understand" Derik said "to the death"
"i understand" the Outcast said " to the death"
" to the death" Lixin said "even though no one will no it you all are true heros."

and so The Starfinder flew into its death within a sun.

End of Series. -DSQrn

Look for Pilot Armanda the sequel to this. i guess the one evrey one wants the one with action not drama.

Sorry about taking so long to respond! Anyways, your story is great! I enjoyed reading it. There is only one small recommendation I can give that could make you stories a bit better; use MS Word. I don't know how you write this, but if you can, use Word or a similar program, then copy and paste to the forum. It would help to clean up the story of typos and stuff.
Again your story was really good!

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Titan, Sabre, Eagle; yeah they're great
But if you want to turn, then you'll have to wait.
So if you wanna get the job done
And you want some fun
Then hop in the Defender
And don't forget your gun!


Edited by - ww2jacob on 9/4/2004 10:09:39 AM

yeah will do thanks jacob

No prob man, and again, nice job!

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Titan, Sabre, Eagle; yeah they're great
But if you want to turn, then you'll have to wait.
So if you wanna get the job done
And you want some fun
Then hop in the Defender
And don't forget your gun!

i keep trying
my new one is meant to be not very happy hehehe....