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Post Sun May 16, 2004 9:32 am

Rite i really want to carry on this fan fiction story so im gunna try, tell me if its crap or not:

Main story part 2

"You must be crazy"Core whined
"Mabye but I know when im telling the truth"
"So you say that you were part of the order?"
"Yes but I dont think that I will be after this"
"So who really did kill the Nomads?"
"A collection of people from different places, like Junko Zane she was part of the LSF, King who also was part of the LSF, the order pilots and one of the most important people of all...."
"Who?"
"Trent Edisen"
"That drun.."
"If it wasnt for him we woudnt be here right now. We would all be dead."
"Dead? How?"
"By the time that we were about to kill off the Nomads, all the major houses were infected by Nomads."
"What do you mean infected?"
"Nomads take over the body of humans. Shulksky was a Nomad and was on his way to infect President Jacobi."
"What?!"
"Well enough about that Nomad stuff"
"But wh.."
"No more stuff about Nomads! God knows they will be back!"
"Be back?"
"Yeh. Hey you didnt know about the hypergate?"
"Hypergate? what in sam hell is that?"
"Jesus its worse than i thought! The Nomads arent dead, they only got sucked into a form of jumphole"
"JUmphole? but that leads to our known systems."
"Yeh but this one is a sort of super powered one. Capable of traveling to systems millions apon millions of lightyears away"
"Thats not possible!"
"Yeh it is, and thats y i think they will be back because all jumpholes can be entered fromn the other end cant they?"
"Yeh but.."
"No buts"
Then suddenly ,out of nowhere, came the noises of men screaming
"No please don.." Two lasers ripped through the walls of the cell.

TO BE CONTINUED (if i can be bothered )

Post Sun May 16, 2004 5:26 pm

i'd say.................... 2 thumbs up(sorta)

People are changed by their worlds Trent, rarely vice versa.
-Jun'ko Zane

Post Sun May 16, 2004 6:42 pm

nice. me like.

You can't run with the big dogs if you pee like a puppy!!!

Post Sun May 16, 2004 6:44 pm

[bothers corsair#01 lol g8 work m8 hope to see more soon!!!

Post Mon May 17, 2004 7:41 am

Thanks for continuing the story mate.
Although, just nitpicking here, but my plan for the story was that Antonio hates Trent, King and Juni because they killed his brother who was an Order pilot during the attack.
He was then broken out of prison by his Corsair buddies (the Order has largely disbanded after the Story), escorts Core Zaire to New London, where they part ways, Core gets some work as a Molly (fresh from prison, he decides to join the er... darker side), ends up in Dublin, where he meets Trent again and races them at the track (Trent runs it now, after beating Hovis in a race where Hovis bet everything he owned). They become friends, but are forced to leave Dublin when Hovis shows up with a few heavily armed friends.... and that's all I'd came up with.

You see, this is why you should write your own story, instead of continuing mine.
I had a plan for this story, and I don't like it when people don't follow it.
You should start your own fan fic, then you could invent a storyline all of your own, instead of simply finishing mine. This is why I started one in the first place, to write something unique. I didn't want to follow the pattern of other fan fics, ie. Trent and Juni fight Nomads. You could do that too, explore areas that no-one else has, write new and interesting. Something that's your's .
No matter how well you write this fan fic, it'll always be mine, recycled by you.
If you start your own, you can create your own universe, your own characters, which is what writing is really about.

Just my 2 Cents, anyways.


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