Do we have a future Harlequin writer?

Okay ..... where did this insperational little short story come from ?

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"There's no such thing as miracles or the supernatural, only cutting-edge technology" - Ocelot
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The above is from a book I am writing, the first page of 98 pages so far.

Finalday

Until that final day. /Keith Green\ (1953-1983)

nice, i want the book when your done


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The trent story is on down

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Finalday

Until that final day. /Keith Green\ (1953-1983)



Edited by - Finalday on 2/10/2004 1:15:42 PM

Books have a rating?
Its good writing though, what sort of story is the second one?

Edited by - dark_reaper on 2/8/2004 8:05:37 PM

i still like the 1st one


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Lets put it this way, the content will be rated and listed on the cover, though anyone can get it. The second one is a fictional piece set around 21ad in israel dealing with a family's life there. I hope it to be about 150 pages when finished. Now, lets hear from some other writers with thier pieces

Finalday

Until that final day. /Keith Green\ (1953-1983)



Edited by - Finalday on 2/8/2004 8:22:13 PM

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It is being written for couples about to marry and those that are married.

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This makes it sound like a guide for marrige.

Sorry old son, I "don't do romance", as they say. Still, I will generously offer you the use of my vast vocabulary and grammatical expertise ( ).

A finishing paragraph from my second book ing The 'Bookmaster' Trilogy:

James stared.
Matt stood up and walked over to james.
‘You’ Said james ‘You did this?’
‘Yes’ Said Matt ‘I was recruited after that school incident. I can see things as they are, not what they wnt to be’
James clenched his fists
‘And what do I look like’ He asked
‘You look like what you are’ He said ‘The gate behind you is a door, the chair is a stool with padding nail gunned to it-‘
‘You kissed June’ James said
‘I had no choice’ Said matt ‘I saw her as she was, an angel, if I could stop her from having yor child, but have mine, My forces would have won’
James cracked his knuckles
‘What did you call my wife?’ He said
‘An angel’ Said Matt ‘Pure in heart and mind’
‘And you intended on seducing my wife to take over the world’ James growled
‘No that was the assasins job’ He replied
‘He failed’ Said James
‘He almost-‘ Began Matt
‘He was too late anyway’ Said James
‘Oh, yes’ Said Matt ‘The explosion outside your apartment wasn’t my doing’
‘Then whose was it?’ Demanded James
‘Sam’
‘Oh, your mate!’ Yelled James
‘He thought that by killing you both we could solve the problem’ Said Matt ‘Only I knew that June was the key’
‘SHUT UP!’
James swung his fist forward and struck a blow on Matts lower jaw
He was sent flying.
James walked forward, anger seeping from every pore in his body.
‘No’ Gasped Matt ‘You can’t’
James grabbed his throat.
‘Watch me’ Growled James
He picked Matt up and threw him through the glass windowpane.
Matt screamed all the way down.
James watched the body fall, eventually being impaled by one of the metal spires at the bottom of the building.

@finalday, I'm not writing any more plays, at least not using TLR posters as characters. But if you haven't seen them the links are below. I used the TLR medium to get myself back into writing and overcoming my writers block, so to say. Although thinking of ideas wasn't the difficulty, it was just having the determination to sit and put the thoughts to keyboard.

@Arania, I take it you have ended your writing for "Mullet's Drainpipe?" So sad. There were some very humouous bits, even though it was rather short.

Sir S

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My Humorous & True Lancers Reactor Plays; with REAL posters as characters in these divine comedies, hosted right here on TLR:

"Much Uba About Nothing"
* "This might be the funniest thread EVER seen on these forums. Encore!" - Stinger
"The Taming of the Psycho" (Hey)
* "Bravo! Bravo! Wow your writing is impressive!" - mb52
"Zlothello"
* "If I video'd my face while reading this, it would've been a comedy in itself." - Imagine
"Reynet - The Prince of Starfyre"
* "I be damned if this isn't your best play yet Sir Spectre." - Nickless

Edited by - Sir Spectre on 2/8/2004 11:03:48 PM

@SS: although this was written before i started mullets drainpipe, i fell it would be pointless for me to continue writing it, as the next section merely incorporates, spam spam and more spam, you arriving, pissing him off, and musty arriving to ban mullet.
Anyway, i feel like i'm going to melt in this weather, and heat is no good for writing spirit.

Anyone wanting to add to that story is welcome to...

Late breaking news: In the U.S. presidential race that was between the republicans and the democrats, there is a new entry. He has appeared out of nowhere. This news service has tried to interview him, but has not gotten much out of him but "Uhuh," or "no thank you, that not what I'm looking for." He is unmarried but has been in the company of a woman that we have learned her name. It's Zane, Junko Zane, though he calls her Juni. His record of employment was freelancer, whatever that is, and working for, what seems a government job with a group call the Liberty Security Force. His name is Trent, Edison Trent, but tells everyone to call him Trent. He also has been seen frequenting bars looking for work. No one knows what to make of this candidate. Now, back to you regular programming.....WTLR Reporting

Sorry to interupt your program, but we have a news report about that new candidate for president. He was seen to day at the police station dragging a man in that he said had a bounty on his head. Thew police said thank you but could not pay the bount until they had a conviction. Trent was heard mumbling "Dang police force, post a bounty then not pay up. SEE if I work you anymore" as he left the station. Now back to your show in progress.....

WTLR News update: The new candidate, Trent Edison, now has a manager to help his bid. His name is Winston Tobias. We were able to get a meeting with him and with the woman, Juni, her reply was "What?", when we asked to know more about her, her reply was , "Oh brother" and she walked away. We will keep you updated in this report at 11:00 pm....

Finalday

Until that final day. /Keith Green\ (1953-1983)


Edited by - Finalday on 2/10/2004 9:20:59 AM

Edited by - Finalday on 2/10/2004 9:44:12 AM