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The Outcasts'' Revenge Part 1 Prologue.

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Post Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:45 am

The Outcasts'' Revenge Part 1 Prologue.

Gordon twisted the nail inside the ship and sighed.
Why should he be like this, repairing ships and selling equipment.
There was a big world out there, waiting to be explored.
He could work for the bretonian police.
But no.He worked at Freeport 4, Magellan System.
BLEEP!
A outcast attack.
Gordon ran to the shelter, and watched the cctv footage of them.
The attack appeared normal at first, but Gordon noticed 1 of the ships was carrying a torpedo launcher.
It could do serious harm to the station!
SIZZLE!
Gordon felt frighted as the torpedo slowly moved towards the station.
The life pods!
He jumped into a life pod...
He tried opening his eyes but he was too weak...
It was too late.

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Post Sat Aug 12, 2006 7:30 am

Nice job, you didnt waste any time, just jumped into the action, i like that. Just dont do it too quick. I like it alot, also because Magellan is like my favorite system!!!! But anyway pretty cool, just make sure u adress why they attacked, since it was a freeport. Ending on good note, i liked it.

When all else fails, tell them you want world peace.

Post Mon Dec 18, 2006 5:48 pm

It may be a freeport, but it is not run by Zoners! Rather, it is run by the IMG, which are enemies of the Outcasts.

Post Tue Dec 19, 2006 8:47 am

Nothing like posting junky fanfic with no research at all, hey?

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